Willing Hearts
Viewing comments for Chapter 24 "Chapter 14 B"Solve a crime and fall in love at the same time?
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Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Boy Howdee, this has gotten even better, if possible. I love love it. My brain is tired. I just wrote "The Elevator" for a contest. It is suitably snarky. I cracked myself up with this one. Send me good wishes please for my move on the 20th. I will be going to Houston to get my stuff out of storage 25+ years of memories. Half will be donated, You can't put a 3 bedroom house in a one bedroom apartment. It will be tough, but then it will be over. I can finish nesting and get on building my new life. I will be happy here. My sister's seem to adore me. What good taste they have! :-) Karen
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Boy Howdee, this has gotten even better, if possible. I love love it. My brain is tired. I just wrote "The Elevator" for a contest. It is suitably snarky. I cracked myself up with this one. Send me good wishes please for my move on the 20th. I will be going to Houston to get my stuff out of storage 25+ years of memories. Half will be donated, You can't put a 3 bedroom house in a one bedroom apartment. It will be tough, but then it will be over. I can finish nesting and get on building my new life. I will be happy here. My sister's seem to adore me. What good taste they have! :-) Karen
Comment Written 11-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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You are in my prayers. I honestly do pray you have a smooth move, well, as smooth at a move can be. Thank you for taking time to drop by and leave this kind review.
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I will be glad when all of the moving part is done. Then it is nesting and organizing and giving away more stuff.!
Comment from Jacob1395
Sorry for taking the time to get round to reading this one, Barbara. I really enjoyed your latest chapter and I thought your dialogue was excellent as always. I really enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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Sorry for taking the time to get round to reading this one, Barbara. I really enjoyed your latest chapter and I thought your dialogue was excellent as always. I really enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this wonderful review, even though no money was attached. Sorry about that.
Comment from Douglas Goff
Okay! I think this is about to get intense. Looks like we are hitting the 'meat and potatoes' with a plan formulating.
I like the new character. He seems like a likable fellow. Wish I could give a 7! Ha!
D
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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Okay! I think this is about to get intense. Looks like we are hitting the 'meat and potatoes' with a plan formulating.
I like the new character. He seems like a likable fellow. Wish I could give a 7! Ha!
D
Comment Written 04-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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Mateo is likeable, but Noah will have to come to that conclusion. He sees him as a threat to his relationship with Sami. Thank you dropping and leaving this kind review. No PLEASE get to work and save Greg, Jenny, and yes, Jesse too. Jenny will be heartbroken if anything happens to her brother.
Comment from tfawcus
This is going to be a major shift in the dynamic of the book. I'll be interested to see Noah's reaction. It looks as though things are about to hot up after all this time in protective custody.
The dialogue, as usual, is strong, but I wondered if the constant repetition of 'Mi Amor' might be slightly overdone.
A good chapter that keeps your readers hooked.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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This is going to be a major shift in the dynamic of the book. I'll be interested to see Noah's reaction. It looks as though things are about to hot up after all this time in protective custody.
The dialogue, as usual, is strong, but I wondered if the constant repetition of 'Mi Amor' might be slightly overdone.
A good chapter that keeps your readers hooked.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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I have wondered that, but I Mateo has told me that's how he thinks, the good part is they won't be together often enough to hear it again. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Trent Delaney
I truly enjoyed that. It felt as if I was in the room listening and observing along with the rest of the crowd. Thank you for sharing. Truly a nice read to me.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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I truly enjoyed that. It felt as if I was in the room listening and observing along with the rest of the crowd. Thank you for sharing. Truly a nice read to me.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Brett Matthew West
"God's gift to women" portrays Mateo as just another self-serving egomaniac.
Some questions this chapter proposes are which side is Mateo really on, Sami's? Perhaps Chen's? And, how is Noah going to react to Mateo's coming on to Sami?
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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"God's gift to women" portrays Mateo as just another self-serving egomaniac.
Some questions this chapter proposes are which side is Mateo really on, Sami's? Perhaps Chen's? And, how is Noah going to react to Mateo's coming on to Sami?
Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Noah remains professional at least until he gets back to the safe house. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Barbara,
Oh boy, I can see some jealousy issues brewing. It would be so hard to find yourself in a situation like that. I hope Noah can continue to keep his professional stance and not be too influenced by the actions of Mateo. Well done gal. Thanks for sharing.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Hello Barbara,
Oh boy, I can see some jealousy issues brewing. It would be so hard to find yourself in a situation like that. I hope Noah can continue to keep his professional stance and not be too influenced by the actions of Mateo. Well done gal. Thanks for sharing.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Noah remains professional at least until he gets back to the safe house. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Paul McFarland
You have set us up for some exciting posts to come, Barb. It will be interesting to see how Noah and Mateo get along. I'm sure there will be some drama.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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You have set us up for some exciting posts to come, Barb. It will be interesting to see how Noah and Mateo get along. I'm sure there will be some drama.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Noah remains professional at least until he gets back to the safe house. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Traveling for most of the last three weeks and about to leave again, I've not been able to keep up. I always try to catch up but not able to read everything this time. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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Traveling for most of the last three weeks and about to leave again, I've not been able to keep up. I always try to catch up but not able to read everything this time. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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I hope this is traveling for fun. Thank you for dropping by leaving this kind review.
Comment from Sanku
Just for te heck of it I have started leearning Espaniol . i do 40 mts every day .I was able to understand the spanish sentences!
The story is really getting ready to go into action...I feel .
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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Just for te heck of it I have started leearning Espaniol . i do 40 mts every day .I was able to understand the spanish sentences!
The story is really getting ready to go into action...I feel .
Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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Spanish is a fun language. Thank you for the kind review.