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The Writing On The Page

what will your writing say?

5 total reviews 
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Exceptional
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This is an unusual and warm hearted post Jim. Full of the memories of your life with your wife that you discovered she wrote about in her journal and you relived those moments you spent together. What a lucky find and thank you for sharing this wonderful poem. Congratulations on your win. Love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2024

Comment from Terry Reilly
Excellent
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Absolutely top class, Jim. You really know how to convert feelings into words on the page. The stamp of a master craftsman. I'm delighted you brought real class to the first competition I have created. Respect.

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2024

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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A beautiful and poignant free verse about your dear Rhonda and the love you shared, so privately reflected in the journals and inspired by your deep faith. Well done and good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2024

Comment from jessizero
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This was a beautifully written poem. I hope we all get our pages cleaned up before it's too late. I like that you wrote it was written in Christ's blood. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2024

Comment from Mintybee
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This free verse poem starts wistfully and then dives into deeper meaning. I think the first part was beautiful and the second part was a good reminder.
Mintybee

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2024