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Comment from barbara.wilkey
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That's one heck of a long time to wait for a kiss. LOL But, the poem is beautiful as is the presentation. Thank you for sharing this very passionate club entry with us. Once again, you're way above the others.

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 17-Jun-2024
    Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. Have a wonderful day.

    Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
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You always describe longing well. And you know how to conjure up all the senses which is why you're such a passionate poet. Enjoyed your choka poem with its lovely illustration!

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 17-Jun-2024
    Thank you very much, big sister.

    Love

    Marival
Comment from Jumbo J
Exceptional
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Well-well-well MariVal(((((((,
haven't these enticing words coated my sensibility in a warm embrace!

What a truly delightful form of poetry the choka is... but under no illusion and know full well, the masters make it look and sound easy:)

There's nothing in the entirety of this stunning poem that I don't absolutely love. Each word and syllable takes its place in the magic of the message woven through the fabric of its intent... yes, a very warm hug indeed!

The build up was sublime and the conclusion... well for me, wasn't a finish at all... it echoed and came back around.

Most stunning in composition, construction and the beauty of your presentation, as always spotless!
I've officially being 'Choka'd'!

With our thoughts we create...
the songs of our soul.

Warmest regards,
Jamie.

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 17-Jun-2024
    James, your beautiful words warm my soul. I'm happy you like my choka poem. Japanese poetry is so beautiful and perfect for you and me, we are visual intuitive people. I hope being choka'd is a good thing (*<>*) lol

    You are so kind, your words and exceptional six stars review mean a lot to me.

    Con cariņo,

    MariVal
    "Learn the rules like a pro, so you can break them like an artist." - Pablo Picasso
Comment from shelley kaye
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the pics you have right beneath the main picture aren't showing up - just little blank boxes - didn't know if you knew or not lol

anyway, a great yearning choka
love the imagery of the second stanza
and the feeling of longing in the last stanza

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
    are you reading in your cellphone? The same happened to me and when I check on my laptop it's fine. I'll see what I can do.

    Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my poem.

    Gypsy
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
    Thank you, Shelley. I changed the page divider flowers beneath top pic
    I appreciate your excellent review and help.

    Gypsy
Comment from GWHARGIS
Exceptional
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Another beautiful and passionate piece of poetry. There is an aire of purity and timelessness to this. The hints of nature mirroring the emotion is stellar. I really enjoyed this. Gretchen

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
    Thank you very much, Gretchen. I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words.

    Gypsy
Comment from royowen
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You sure know romantic and poetic language which reaches far beyond our ability to live in that written wisdom, which reveals the gift that can be shared beyon the natural human view, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
    Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my poem.

    Gypsy
reply by royowen on 16-Jun-2024
    Well done