Comment from zanya

Excellent

Yes sometimes we genuinely forget to tell our beloved just how much they mean to us in our lives as we involve ourselves in the daily grind but love is constant

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024

Many thanks zanya

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Love the visual which complements your verse so well. He is definitely announcing his love to her and making sure she knows it. Nice rhyme and general presentation. Well done and good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024

Thank you so much Debbie

Comment from Shirley Ann Bunyan

Excellent

Oh, how true these words are. A very good reminder to us all to actually tell our loved ones how we feel. Told succinctly, within the form and even incorporates a rhyme. Well done.

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024

Thank you so much. Jen

Comment from ESOSTINE

Excellent

Some time we don't openly show how much love we have for someone, even when we have the opportunity to express it. Well done, and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024

Thank you so much

Comment from Nicole Schmidt

Excellent

You may not know it

as I don't always show it

but I do love you

Unique and fun overall. These can be tough to write. Best of luck overall with this

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024

Thanks

Comment from zaraduck6

Excellent

Wonderful poem! The word choice was fabulous, and you nailed the 5-7-5 syllable count of a haiku. I like how the first two lines rhyme. Good luck with the contest! Very well done!

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024

Thank you so much