The Tainted
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Preparation"A fantasy story following hunter Taya
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Comment from jim vecchio
Your tale is continuing very well. The brief synopsis and character list should satisfy all reviewers. I enjoy your versatility in telling the tale, from action to quieter times, and mixture of narrative and dialogue.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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Your tale is continuing very well. The brief synopsis and character list should satisfy all reviewers. I enjoy your versatility in telling the tale, from action to quieter times, and mixture of narrative and dialogue.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much, I'm glad you're enjoying it!
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Very much so.
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
Jer informed us that all the supplies were gathered. We decided to take a horse and buggy so we didn't have to carry everything. Derek offered to drive and Dave sat up front to keep him company. The rest of us piled into the buggy with the supplies. I'm just happy to conserve energy. That bed was amazing but two hours of sleep wasn't enough. I had dessert so I guess that makes up for something.
Grabbed my attention and held it!!
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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Jer informed us that all the supplies were gathered. We decided to take a horse and buggy so we didn't have to carry everything. Derek offered to drive and Dave sat up front to keep him company. The rest of us piled into the buggy with the supplies. I'm just happy to conserve energy. That bed was amazing but two hours of sleep wasn't enough. I had dessert so I guess that makes up for something.
Grabbed my attention and held it!!
Comment Written 07-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from Ricky1024
This chapter was well written Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and have a Blessed day.
Doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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This chapter was well written Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and have a Blessed day.
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 07-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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Thank you Doctor Ricky