The Night We Met
5-7-5 Love Poem18 total reviews
Comment from zaraduck6
Beautiful haiku. Very well done. I could really imagine the scene being played out in this poem. This is a very good entry.
And the artwork is beautiful and really complements the poem.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2024
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Beautiful haiku. Very well done. I could really imagine the scene being played out in this poem. This is a very good entry.
And the artwork is beautiful and really complements the poem.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much!
Xo
Jess
Comment from Dawn Munro
That feeling! It is so intense, and your small poem expresses it beautifully -- falling in love is a little like spring rain -- refreshing, but oh-so-suspect. Will it last? Is it good for me? An excellent entry for this contest -- best of luck.
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That feeling! It is so intense, and your small poem expresses it beautifully -- falling in love is a little like spring rain -- refreshing, but oh-so-suspect. Will it last? Is it good for me? An excellent entry for this contest -- best of luck.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2024
Comment from Jill D
Isn't it amazing how on a stormy windy dad we just want to run for shelter and kinda curse the grey day BUT when you're not alone and with the person of your dreams it's the best feeling in the world! Lovely piece!
All the best.
Jill:)
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Isn't it amazing how on a stormy windy dad we just want to run for shelter and kinda curse the grey day BUT when you're not alone and with the person of your dreams it's the best feeling in the world! Lovely piece!
All the best.
Jill:)
Comment Written 04-Jun-2024
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, The Night We Met, has the proper formatting and blends the falling rain in with the emotions of two people caught in a torrent of weather and emotions. Nice.
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This 5-7-5, The Night We Met, has the proper formatting and blends the falling rain in with the emotions of two people caught in a torrent of weather and emotions. Nice.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2024
Comment from June Sargent
Comparing rainfall to the process of falling in love is perfect. You captured the essence of romance in just a few short lines. Well fine. Love the artwork as well.
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Comparing rainfall to the process of falling in love is perfect. You captured the essence of romance in just a few short lines. Well fine. Love the artwork as well.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2024
Comment from AP Apgar
What and excellent poem and picture presentation supporting - well written with a good ending line - fell like spring rain - nice- the simplicity of 5/7/5 poems using an economy of words in 17, is always more challenging to me - well done - AP
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What and excellent poem and picture presentation supporting - well written with a good ending line - fell like spring rain - nice- the simplicity of 5/7/5 poems using an economy of words in 17, is always more challenging to me - well done - AP
Comment Written 03-Jun-2024
Comment from jessizero
You did a great job telling this love story in a 5-7-5 love poem. It was intense and romantic. I also like the picture you supplied. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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You did a great job telling this love story in a 5-7-5 love poem. It was intense and romantic. I also like the picture you supplied. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2024
Comment from Begin Again
And lots of thunder and lightening flashed as two hearts gently melded as one. Nice thoughts in your short poem. Great job! Good luck in the contest.
Smiles, Carol
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And lots of thunder and lightening flashed as two hearts gently melded as one. Nice thoughts in your short poem. Great job! Good luck in the contest.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 03-Jun-2024
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Oh, I love this:-) Falling in love like spring rain as the thunderstorm roars by. Great use of your 17 syllables and the presentation is lovely.
Good luck.
xo
Pam
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2024
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Oh, I love this:-) Falling in love like spring rain as the thunderstorm roars by. Great use of your 17 syllables and the presentation is lovely.
Good luck.
xo
Pam
Comment Written 03-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much, Pam!
Xo
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi,
This is a well written poem the brings to mind the movie "Dancing in the Rain". I like the metaphor of falling in love like the falling rain.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck in the contest.
Have a great day.
Joan
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2024
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Hi,
This is a well written poem the brings to mind the movie "Dancing in the Rain". I like the metaphor of falling in love like the falling rain.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck in the contest.
Have a great day.
Joan
Comment Written 03-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much!
Xo
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You are most kindly welcome, Jessica.
Joan