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Comment from Nicole Schmidt
I feel like we need more context in this. It kind of jumps from thought to thought without a lot to back it up. More substance I suppose is what I am trying to say here. I like the idea though.
reply by the author on 23-May-2024
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I feel like we need more context in this. It kind of jumps from thought to thought without a lot to back it up. More substance I suppose is what I am trying to say here. I like the idea though.
Comment Written 23-May-2024
reply by the author on 23-May-2024
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thanks a lot for your opinion
Comment from jessizero
I got a laugh out of this short story. I had a horrible roommate in a college dorm, so I can relate to this. I think this was a great entry for the contest. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 23-May-2024
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I got a laugh out of this short story. I had a horrible roommate in a college dorm, so I can relate to this. I think this was a great entry for the contest. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 23-May-2024
reply by the author on 23-May-2024
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thanks a lot as always