Twinkle, Twinkle
For the Sci-Fi Flash Fiction conest.4 total reviews
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine tale, Hull, and are you sure you weren't simply under the influence of a mind altering drug! No, very creative write,. and scary for you if it happened
Another fine tale, Hull, and are you sure you weren't simply under the influence of a mind altering drug! No, very creative write,. and scary for you if it happened
Comment Written 26-May-2024
Comment from RodG
I like your story because it seems real. Now how large could that star have been? You describe "it" very well, making your reader visualize what happened. Good use of dialog to add tension and your last line is terrific as you make us wonder if the Speaker LITERALLY swallowed that star. Rod
reply by the author on 12-May-2024
I like your story because it seems real. Now how large could that star have been? You describe "it" very well, making your reader visualize what happened. Good use of dialog to add tension and your last line is terrific as you make us wonder if the Speaker LITERALLY swallowed that star. Rod
Comment Written 12-May-2024
reply by the author on 12-May-2024
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Thank you so much for the encouragement.
Comment from marthag1
I enjoyed the element of surprise rendering the main character speechless- the story ending is very clever since there is nothing more final than disbelief- yet we experience a short glimpse of the super natural
reply by the author on 12-May-2024
I enjoyed the element of surprise rendering the main character speechless- the story ending is very clever since there is nothing more final than disbelief- yet we experience a short glimpse of the super natural
Comment Written 12-May-2024
reply by the author on 12-May-2024
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Thank you so much for reading.
Comment from royowen
A great attempt at writing a connection between connecting a fabulous end to the flash fiction, you have done a good job with this post my friend, good luck in the contest, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 12-May-2024
A great attempt at writing a connection between connecting a fabulous end to the flash fiction, you have done a good job with this post my friend, good luck in the contest, blessings Roy
Comment Written 12-May-2024
reply by the author on 12-May-2024
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Thanks for the encouragement!
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Well done