Transforming
What might have transpired for a character in Trainspotting.2 total reviews
Comment from Douglas Goff
Great ending.
Spacing issues:
1) I'm thinkin' "run tae fuck", but I'm stuck tae the spot. Like paralysed. Like she's done some sort o'
magic oan me.
2) I never really understood why. Just...well, they're different, intit? Jeez. Wi'oot thinkin' I hear masel
say "a'right". Is this like whit the alkies cry "a dry drunk"?
Fun read!
D
reply by the author on 01-May-2024
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Great ending.
Spacing issues:
1) I'm thinkin' "run tae fuck", but I'm stuck tae the spot. Like paralysed. Like she's done some sort o'
magic oan me.
2) I never really understood why. Just...well, they're different, intit? Jeez. Wi'oot thinkin' I hear masel
say "a'right". Is this like whit the alkies cry "a dry drunk"?
Fun read!
D
Comment Written 01-May-2024
reply by the author on 01-May-2024
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Thanks, Douglas. Not for the first time I have edited this as much as the website will permit. If you know of a way I can close those horrible gaps, please tell me. It?s embarrassing.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your writing is raw and you share this story so well. The use of dialect immersed me into the gritty world you portray here. But it also makes it feel authenticity. The story was interesting. It easily kept my interest. Great job.
reply by the author on 01-May-2024
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Your writing is raw and you share this story so well. The use of dialect immersed me into the gritty world you portray here. But it also makes it feel authenticity. The story was interesting. It easily kept my interest. Great job.
Comment Written 01-May-2024
reply by the author on 01-May-2024
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Many thanks, Michael.