Comment from nancyjam

Excellent

Congratulations for placing 3rd in the contest. Your lines present a lovely picture. Nice use of alliteration in the second line. Nice imagery throughout. A pleasure to read.
Nancy

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024

Thanks, Nancy, for offering your congrats. I appreciate your thoughtfulness.

Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill

Excellent

What a beautiful picture you gave us. You did not state in the author's notes where it came from. Your poetry is lovely. I will be scarce for a while. I am moving May18 to be near my sisters. Good work.
Karen

 Comment Written 02-May-2024

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reply by the author on 02-May-2024

Thanks, Karen. Good luck with your move.

reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 03-May-2024

:-)

Comment from June Sargent

Excellent

What a delicious image you've created with your three lines! I am looking forward to the return of my little feathered friends this summer. Great entry for the contest.

 Comment Written 01-May-2024

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reply by the author on 02-May-2024

Thanks, June.

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Congratulations! A fine finish and beautiful entry for the three line poetry contest. Great job, my friend. Sending you my best today as always and my very best wishes in the NaPoWriMo 2024 Contest.
Sal Xoxo

 Comment Written 01-May-2024

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reply by the author on 02-May-2024

Thanks, Sally, for your "sweet" review.

reply by Sally Law on 02-May-2024

My pleasure! Sal :))

Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

This poem serves to remind me that those hummingbirds in my yard are still waiting for me to get my feeder up. This is a neat poem and I love the picture you chose.

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 01-May-2024

Thanks, Beth. I'm glad you feed the hummingbirds.

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

How very beautiful. One sometimes doesn't think of the pleasure and joy of birds when they enjoy what we would consider basic necessities. Lovely poem.
Wendy

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 01-May-2024

Thanks, Wendy.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Congratulations on completing your Napowrimo challenge and you expertly added many of your chapters into other contests - so clever!
I love hummingbirds - and their wings to make a lot of whirring noises!

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 01-May-2024

Thank you, Helen.

Comment from RodG

Excellent

A nice way to end your NaPoWriMo month of writing poetry. Who does not stare in awe at hummingbirds? I see them so seldom in my yard.
Anyway, congrats on your achievement. You should be proud of yourself. Rod

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 01-May-2024

Thank you, Rod.

Comment from Mark Jackson

Excellent

This haiku succeeds in capturing the beauty and grace of nature in a concise and elegant manner. It invites the reader to pause and appreciate the small wonders of the natural world, making it a delightful and evocative piece.

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 Comment Written 30-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024

Thank you, Mark. I appreciate your comments.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 5-7-5, Summer's Nectar, has the proper formatting and freezes this moment in time as the floating nectar nipper vacuums up his/her share of the juicy juice.

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 Comment Written 30-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024

Thanks for your review.