Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

He certainly made it a popular thing back then... :-) Thank you so much for sharing your 5-7-5 take on this 'unique' prompt and best of luck to you in the contest!

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024

Thank you!

Comment from Marilyn Hamilton

Excellent

An excellent entry for the Zombie 5-7-5 writing prompt. I love this poem. Who doesn't think of Thriller anytime the word zombie is mentioned? I can remember watching the TV when it first came out and I sat up at midnight to see it. First time zombies were sexy! If I could make a suggestion it would be to increase your font size. It is difficult for these old eyes to read and it look all fuzzy. It might just be me but there could be other having difficulty. Otherwise, great work!

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024

Thank you so much! I will change the font.

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

I like that you based your zombie 5-7-5 poem on Michael Jackson's "Thriller" video. This poem was fun, and you got the syllable count right. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024

Thank you!