The Book of Trump
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Trump Poem for Kids"the life and times of Donald J Trump
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Comment from Boogienights
Not sure this is appropriate for kids, but l do agree with everyrhing you say. Trump will win, no doubt in my mind....just in time to save this country.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Not sure this is appropriate for kids, but l do agree with everyrhing you say. Trump will win, no doubt in my mind....just in time to save this country.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Thank you Boogie!
Comment from Gloria ....
Ha, this is a perfect kid's poem. I can see boys 8+ getting a charge out of the he man, souped-up truck and the possibility of mud-bogging. After a delicious hamburger or foot long hot dog of course.
Very funny so great luck to you with the voters. I think Trump might actually look at publishing a book like this to sell at his rallies:)
Gloria
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Ha, this is a perfect kid's poem. I can see boys 8+ getting a charge out of the he man, souped-up truck and the possibility of mud-bogging. After a delicious hamburger or foot long hot dog of course.
Very funny so great luck to you with the voters. I think Trump might actually look at publishing a book like this to sell at his rallies:)
Gloria
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Finally a reader who understands the relevance of this piece to children : ) And yes I think you might be right in your prediction. LOL.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A powerful post full of political criticism and sarcasm. The metre is a bit off in places, but this did not detract from the sentiment here of the reality in politics. It always amazes me how the Americans vote for the person rather than the party politics and always get side tracked by someone's personal life rather than the facts behind the basic party beliefs.
The Democrats are socialists and socialism never helps a country prosper, it only creates debt and in trying to equalise society, the result is always less freedom for the individual. This is why I could never vote for left wing politics. Conservatives (Republicans) encourage the masses to make money and give them the tools to do it.
I think you are right, Trump will win the next election as the weak-willed Biden administration has caused small wars to start all over the world under a man who is blind to his responsible position of President of a superpower. God help the world if Biden secures another term in office.
Not sure this poem is for children, but I enjoyed the ride, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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A powerful post full of political criticism and sarcasm. The metre is a bit off in places, but this did not detract from the sentiment here of the reality in politics. It always amazes me how the Americans vote for the person rather than the party politics and always get side tracked by someone's personal life rather than the facts behind the basic party beliefs.
The Democrats are socialists and socialism never helps a country prosper, it only creates debt and in trying to equalise society, the result is always less freedom for the individual. This is why I could never vote for left wing politics. Conservatives (Republicans) encourage the masses to make money and give them the tools to do it.
I think you are right, Trump will win the next election as the weak-willed Biden administration has caused small wars to start all over the world under a man who is blind to his responsible position of President of a superpower. God help the world if Biden secures another term in office.
Not sure this poem is for children, but I enjoyed the ride, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 06-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Thanks Dolly for the thoughtful comments. Based on your meter comments, I have standardized it a bit to read more consistently. Much appreciated.
Comment from Dr. Nad
Wow, tell us how you really feel. Lol Somehow or other I have misunderstood. I thought the prompt was to write a poem for a child. It is not anything that I would think of for a child. But like I said, I have misunderstood. Is it possible that you do think a child would want to hear how Trump was going to win it in a tsunami? But, to each his own. Anyway, thanks for writing and sharing.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
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Wow, tell us how you really feel. Lol Somehow or other I have misunderstood. I thought the prompt was to write a poem for a child. It is not anything that I would think of for a child. But like I said, I have misunderstood. Is it possible that you do think a child would want to hear how Trump was going to win it in a tsunami? But, to each his own. Anyway, thanks for writing and sharing.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
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I guess it depends on the age and exposure of the kids! A child with Trump supporting parents might really like it. I have no idea. I would have thought it was funny to read this as a kid, but I can only speak for me...
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Well said. Parents forge a strong influence on their children. Kids from both sides of the aisle are creating strong feelings at a young age these days. Blessings.
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Well said. Parents forge a strong influence on their children. Kids from both sides of the aisle are creating strong feelings at a young age these days. Blessings.
Comment from GoWiSt
Great humorous graphic art. Ha! Not sure most kids would get all the info. Good rhymes. Didn't know that green plantains were stupid--ha! It will be a very interesting election. Good read.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Great humorous graphic art. Ha! Not sure most kids would get all the info. Good rhymes. Didn't know that green plantains were stupid--ha! It will be a very interesting election. Good read.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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For older kids and kids at heart! Thanks and glad you enjoyed this piece.
Comment from kahpot
I thoroughly enjoyed this, though if I may, I think the children this is aimed at would have to be rather old ones, love the power artwork, as your words build Trump up, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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I thoroughly enjoyed this, though if I may, I think the children this is aimed at would have to be rather old ones, love the power artwork, as your words build Trump up, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 06-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Yes older kids and kids at heart! One of the funny things about Trump is that his supporters and satirists are often virtually indistinguishable. It's a fun zone to occupy : )
