Access Denied
The results of the war that took place in heaven43 total reviews
Comment from CornishChick
This is beautiful. The words flow so well. The text is tight, yet colorful. Revelation is such a difficult book to understand. You had the courage to attack it! Good for you!!
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2024
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This is beautiful. The words flow so well. The text is tight, yet colorful. Revelation is such a difficult book to understand. You had the courage to attack it! Good for you!!
Comment Written 13-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2024
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Thank you, weekly Bible study helps a lot.
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Access Denied, peeks into the gloomy future which, living in a more linear time line, takes the readers to the clash of power and faux-power. The serpent bottoms out.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024
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This poem, Access Denied, peeks into the gloomy future which, living in a more linear time line, takes the readers to the clash of power and faux-power. The serpent bottoms out.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024
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Excellent summation. Frankly, I did not think you had it in you. I am obviously impressed. Thank you for your review comments.
Comment from Gunner Lil
A well written poem. Also direct and to the point.
The picture you used is outstanding.
An easy read that has a nice pace and flow.
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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A well written poem. Also direct and to the point.
The picture you used is outstanding.
An easy read that has a nice pace and flow.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your awesome review comments.
Comment from Terry Broxson
Nomi, this is a well-written, thought-provoking poem. One line that caused pause, and thought was that the devil and his angels were confined to a 1,000 years on the earthly floor. Jesus died 2,000 years ago. Does that mean the Devil has been free on earth for 1,000 years to do his evil? Well done. Terry.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Nomi, this is a well-written, thought-provoking poem. One line that caused pause, and thought was that the devil and his angels were confined to a 1,000 years on the earthly floor. Jesus died 2,000 years ago. Does that mean the Devil has been free on earth for 1,000 years to do his evil? Well done. Terry.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Thank you for the review. Actually that confinement is yet to come, He is now free to reign death and destruction freely. That confinement is to take place sometime in the to be determined future.
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Nomi, thanks for the clarification. Our little Baptist Church in West Texas didn't do much with Revelations back in the 50s and 60s.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
It is comforting to know that God will not allow the likes of such people who are going around today creating wars, torturing souls, liars, cheaters, so much evil on Earth today. I'm glad will keep His doors closed to such people. I really enjoyed your poem, my friend, that picture should worry a lot of people! Well done. Love and hugs, Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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It is comforting to know that God will not allow the likes of such people who are going around today creating wars, torturing souls, liars, cheaters, so much evil on Earth today. I'm glad will keep His doors closed to such people. I really enjoyed your poem, my friend, that picture should worry a lot of people! Well done. Love and hugs, Sandra xxx
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much Sandra. It is heart warming and a blessing as well to know that I am associating with such wonderful people as yourself. May God richly bless and keep you. Amen.
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You, too, my friend. xx
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
This was well written, and your strong feeling for the subject shines through. Have you tried any of the Japanese forms of poetry? Haiku, Senryn, ot Tanka?
They are tough but fun to do. Karen
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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This was well written, and your strong feeling for the subject shines through. Have you tried any of the Japanese forms of poetry? Haiku, Senryn, ot Tanka?
They are tough but fun to do. Karen
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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I am familiar with them, however at my age (81), I lack the bold and daring will needed, to attempt learning and putting forth enough effort to make it worthwhile. I would be devastated if I was not good at it.
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I am old too, but my brain needs constant stimulation to misdirect my pain receptors. I have constant pain 24/7 and gave up RX pain meds years ago. They actually did less and less and required more and more. I keep busy and attempt to out run it. I am mostly successful. When I attempt something brand new I run it past a few friends here before I post it that way I don't pull a real boner. I have attempted to write a western for some time. I am horrible at it. I hope you write more. It helps in all kinds of ways. Karen
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I can think of little else that would be better than helping out a fellow author. I pledge to all that I can to be of heelp to you.
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You are just the sweetest thing. As Tennessee Ernie Ford said "I thank you from the bottom of my pea picking Heart." Karen
Comment from ~Dovey
Hi Nomi!
Keep spreading the Word!
I enjoyed your interpretation of this scripture and the black and white presentation is striking.
Thank you for sharing.
Kim
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Hi Nomi!
Keep spreading the Word!
I enjoyed your interpretation of this scripture and the black and white presentation is striking.
Thank you for sharing.
Kim
Comment Written 06-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Thank you for a very inspiring review.
Comment from Brenda Strauser
I enjoyed reading your poem. I can't wait either until we see Jesus. This world is such a mess. I liked the picture. It was perfect for your poem. Very good job on this.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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I enjoyed reading your poem. I can't wait either until we see Jesus. This world is such a mess. I liked the picture. It was perfect for your poem. Very good job on this.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much. I appreciate your fine comments.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation, nomi.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-You did a good job with the poem,
introducing it with the scripture.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-I like how you address it to Satan, as well.
-Each set of couplets describes the nature of Satan
and the things he has done, but now
he's "confined to an earthly floor.
Soon you'll be locked into the abyss."
-I like the idea of the abyss.
-Then you show how God will take care of us;
He will "wipe away our tears and our fears."
-A very good closing couplet.
-Hope you had a Happy Birthday, too. I
enjoyed reading Debi's poem.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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-Very nice artwork and presentation, nomi.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-You did a good job with the poem,
introducing it with the scripture.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-I like how you address it to Satan, as well.
-Each set of couplets describes the nature of Satan
and the things he has done, but now
he's "confined to an earthly floor.
Soon you'll be locked into the abyss."
-I like the idea of the abyss.
-Then you show how God will take care of us;
He will "wipe away our tears and our fears."
-A very good closing couplet.
-Hope you had a Happy Birthday, too. I
enjoyed reading Debi's poem.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Thank you Pam. I very much enjoy reading your posts. You are very talented and I respect and admire you.
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You are very welcome, nomi, and I feel the same about you. I always enjoy your work.
Have a great day and week ahead.
Comment from GoWiSt
Striking imagery in the artwork. Messages from Revelations always scare me--so graphically cataclysmic. Good rhymes. I wish the devil would be locked up for way more than a thousand years--but forever. Will evil ever cease/end for this world? God help us all. Good poem.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Striking imagery in the artwork. Messages from Revelations always scare me--so graphically cataclysmic. Good rhymes. I wish the devil would be locked up for way more than a thousand years--but forever. Will evil ever cease/end for this world? God help us all. Good poem.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Thank you for an awesome review.