2024 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 23 "In The Morning Sun".
13 total reviews
Comment from Michael Cassar
A sensuous, prudently erotic poem, triggered during the peaceful rest, of a partner. Each line is adorned with measured calls to emotional tempting actions. Yet deliberately the author shows restraint . Calmly awaiting her lover's response - from the moonbeams to bask of the sun.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024
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A sensuous, prudently erotic poem, triggered during the peaceful rest, of a partner. Each line is adorned with measured calls to emotional tempting actions. Yet deliberately the author shows restraint . Calmly awaiting her lover's response - from the moonbeams to bask of the sun.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much for the exceptional six stars review, Michael.
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Absolute honor!
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Absolute honor!
Comment from Jumbo J
Well, well, well!
Hot, hot, hot!
Being the romantic hot blooded type that I am, how can I not be drawn into such a scene? Impossible!
I'm not sure if my breathing has returned to normal as yet... it's like I've had too many cups of coffee and my heart beat is on fast mode.
I love the way you incorporate so many senses within this beautifully passionate poem. I'm watching, I'm anticipating... I'm sniffing the air trying to caress and capture the scent. I'm thinking of the taste of such a kiss and all the things that it leads to with the start of a brand new day.
Hmmmmm... what a way to start the day!
All the very best in this Love Poem Poetry contest MariVal.
As always, so stunningly composed, presented and given with so much candid passion. Yes, these words and thoughts linger way past their read!
With our thoughts we create...
the magic of true connection.
Warmest regards,
James.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2024
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Well, well, well!
Hot, hot, hot!
Being the romantic hot blooded type that I am, how can I not be drawn into such a scene? Impossible!
I'm not sure if my breathing has returned to normal as yet... it's like I've had too many cups of coffee and my heart beat is on fast mode.
I love the way you incorporate so many senses within this beautifully passionate poem. I'm watching, I'm anticipating... I'm sniffing the air trying to caress and capture the scent. I'm thinking of the taste of such a kiss and all the things that it leads to with the start of a brand new day.
Hmmmmm... what a way to start the day!
All the very best in this Love Poem Poetry contest MariVal.
As always, so stunningly composed, presented and given with so much candid passion. Yes, these words and thoughts linger way past their read!
With our thoughts we create...
the magic of true connection.
Warmest regards,
James.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2024
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James! It's so good to hear from you. (*<>*)
Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review. I'm happy that you like it. I did try to incorporate the senses since making love with your mate slows down time and heightens everything inside and out. Right? I know you get it and that's why your reviews mean so much to me.
I hope you and Jade are well.
Con cariņo,
MariVal
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I'm just dropping in... things seem to be at a heightened state at present and I'm just trying to ride the wave the best I can... one thing after the other has been my life for close on three months now, I don't really know why, but as I said, I'm resigned, I have released to a higher power and I'll ride it out... but I will try to drop in here and there. I really miss being able to just be and write, but unfortunately I'm in the middle of a life process... that and I am organising my father's memorial service which is in just under three weeks... the wheels are spinning dear friend!
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I'm sorry it's taking so long, it must be exhausting. I think you have a good attitude... ride that wave and turn it to the divine. I will continue to pray for you, my dear friend.
I'm facing some health challenges and I'm doing the same thing.... ride the wave... what a great imagistic metaphor. It gets better.
Con cariņo,
Marival
"It always seems impossible until it is done." -Nelson Mandela
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This is a very sensual love poem contest entry. I like the way you used the senses to describe this scene, especially taste. Wonderful entry. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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This is a very sensual love poem contest entry. I like the way you used the senses to describe this scene, especially taste. Wonderful entry. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara.
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Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
This was lovely. The love is in the early stages, where all is romance. Then you move into yearning, where you feel you could belong together. Move in together.
That's where the trouble starts.:-) Karen
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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This was lovely. The love is in the early stages, where all is romance. Then you move into yearning, where you feel you could belong together. Move in together.
That's where the trouble starts.:-) Karen
Comment Written 23-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much, Karen.
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Comment from Jesse James Doty
This is romantic and just a bit steamy but within the realms of propriety and still conveys the wonderful feelings attributed to love intertwined with raw emotions early in the morning. I love the picture. It helps send the message of romantic love. Thanks for creating the lovely feel-good poetry to start the day right.
Jesse
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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This is romantic and just a bit steamy but within the realms of propriety and still conveys the wonderful feelings attributed to love intertwined with raw emotions early in the morning. I love the picture. It helps send the message of romantic love. Thanks for creating the lovely feel-good poetry to start the day right.
Jesse
Comment Written 23-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much, Jesse.
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Comment from GWHARGIS
This was quite sensuous. I loved the way you used taste to set the scene. It was beautiful imagery and quite romantic. Thank you for sharing. Gretchen
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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This was quite sensuous. I loved the way you used taste to set the scene. It was beautiful imagery and quite romantic. Thank you for sharing. Gretchen
Comment Written 22-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much, Gretchen.
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Comment from royowen
A most wonderful post you've written here dear gypsy, such passion poured out from a pen with super ink in its nib. You've done a wonderful job composing this loving narrative, well done, blessing Roy
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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A most wonderful post you've written here dear gypsy, such passion poured out from a pen with super ink in its nib. You've done a wonderful job composing this loving narrative, well done, blessing Roy
Comment Written 22-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much, Roy.
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Most welcume
Comment from shelley kaye
nice love poem...
great imagistic word choices
good smooth flowing lines
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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nice love poem...
great imagistic word choices
good smooth flowing lines
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
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Comment Written 22-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley. 😊
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Comment from Baltimore Born
This is a well-crafted poem. Your first stanza opens the poem strongly. Good personifications throughout the poem. Good complimentary picture that accentuates the poem well. Nice job.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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This is a well-crafted poem. Your first stanza opens the poem strongly. Good personifications throughout the poem. Good complimentary picture that accentuates the poem well. Nice job.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much, Baltimore.
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Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Intimacy and romance in this poem. Years ago they used to publish a True Story magazine. Did you ever read the magazine? This poem reminds me of the intimacy of those stories.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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Intimacy and romance in this poem. Years ago they used to publish a True Story magazine. Did you ever read the magazine? This poem reminds me of the intimacy of those stories.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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No, I don't think so, that's fantastic. Thank you very much, Rosemary.
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