My Puppy Dog
He is a playful friend.3 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written Children's rhyming poem about your puppy dog. You used great descriptive and rhyming words. That is a very cute picture you chose to use with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2024
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This is a very well written Children's rhyming poem about your puppy dog. You used great descriptive and rhyming words. That is a very cute picture you chose to use with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 22-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2024
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Thanks for taking the time to read and provide encouraging feedback. Appreciated.
Comment from jessizero
What a sweet and fun poem you have written here! It made me smile just reading it. The picture suits it well, also. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2024
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What a sweet and fun poem you have written here! It made me smile just reading it. The picture suits it well, also. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2024
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Thank you for your read and encouraging feedback.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is a cute poem that will attract children's interest. You use good rhymes that flow well and colorful descriptive imagery. I enjoyed reviewing this. Thank you for sharing it.
A grammar note:
Lies in the sun and sleep awhile
If you use lies, you must use sleeps not sleep
Best wishes,
Alex
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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This is a cute poem that will attract children's interest. You use good rhymes that flow well and colorful descriptive imagery. I enjoyed reviewing this. Thank you for sharing it.
A grammar note:
Lies in the sun and sleep awhile
If you use lies, you must use sleeps not sleep
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 21-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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Thanks for the catch. Appreciate your close read.