Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written free verse poem you have penned. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024

Thank you, Teri. I always appreciate your kind words. I hope you have a wonderful day.

Gypsy hugs

reply by Teri7 on 01-Feb-2024

You are so welcome my friend!

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

There's a song about dreaming the impossible dream. I think it's from 'Man of La Mancha' and many people have song it. Some dreams seem impossible but with God all things are possible. Thank you for sharing this entire presentation with us.

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024

Thank you very much, Barbara.

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Comment from shelley kaye

Exceptional

oooh i really liked this one
great imagery of impossible things
could totally "see" them all in my weird imagination lol

smooth flow from line to line - and love the satori-type ending

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024

Thank you, Shelley. I always appreciate your kind words. Thank you for the exceptional review. I hope you have a wonderful day.

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Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I guess the dream of being in love was just the opposite of the way it was in real life. It's good that she can dream of the impossible and at least experience the happiness in the dream.

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024

Thank you very much, big sister.

Love,

Marival

Comment from LateBloomer

Excellent

Hi Gypsy, I like the whimsical ending of your poem. True love prevails.
Your poem reads and flows well and has good imagery. Of note:

and the moon fell to earth.
For dreaming the impossible,
I dreamt we were in love

(Nice--good sensory appeal)

Fantastic photo. Well done. Xo. M

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024

Thank you very much. 😊

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Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

This was a very sad poem. Yet, we've all had that one person we think would give us eternal happiness but the universe keeps us apart. But it's based on fantasy and usually best if left in fantasy world. Great poem. Gretchen

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024

Yes, it's fantasy, just a poem.

Thank you very much. 😊

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Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a very good presentation of Japanese poetry format. I enjoyed listening to it very much. I wish you the very best with all of your writing and I wish for you that you stay healthy and well.

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024

Thank you very much. 😊

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