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Unintentional

A first encounter.

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Comment from Sabrina H.
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Beautiful poem the passion of first meeting someone. The syllable count was spot on. Nicely well written poem.
Best of luck for your entry.
Keep writing:)

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 25-Jan-2024
    Thank you! The competition is full of good ones!
Comment from Allieas
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You did a good job describing an unexpected spark of passion with a stranger. I enjoyed your poem, and the image you chose to accompany it is perfect. Good luck on the contest!

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 25-Jan-2024
    Thank you! The competition is full of good ones!