3rd From the Sun, Days are Done
Toodle-oo, Terra!2 total reviews
Comment from Gunner Lil
Great picture and greater poem.
An easy read that has a nice flow with very good pace.
This reader would not have used the question mark if reader wrote this fine poem.
Thank you.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Great picture and greater poem.
An easy read that has a nice flow with very good pace.
This reader would not have used the question mark if reader wrote this fine poem.
Thank you.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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I contemplated using and not using the question mark, but stuck with it in the end. Thank you for reviewing and your kindness.
Comment from Allieas
You did a great job capturing the concept of the end of earth's journey in a lighthearted way. The visuals of something that would be terrifying in reality were fun and almost mystical. I enjoyed reading! Good luck in the contest!
Alex
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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You did a great job capturing the concept of the end of earth's journey in a lighthearted way. The visuals of something that would be terrifying in reality were fun and almost mystical. I enjoyed reading! Good luck in the contest!
Alex
Comment Written 23-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Many thanks for reading this and tour kind words!