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Book of Christian Poetry/Photography
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Comment from
Julie Helms
Very interesting poem. I enjoyed really looking at it to see all the nuances you placed throughout it.
I especially like your first comparison that riding on the back of the devil is like being asleep, and knowing God is like being awake, though it is painful. Sounds like the truth to me! Thanks for sharing! Julie
Comment Written 21-Jan-2024
Comment from
Allieas
Your beautiful words are an evocative testament to your faith. I felt your emotions as I read the words.
this really resonated with me: I pace the corners of God's heart.
A frantic attempt to summon a friend.
Gasping for air as I travel through his vessel.
I must breathe and see that this is not the end.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2024
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