2024 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "I don't Want to Die".
13 total reviews
Comment from Gloria ....
Superb presentation here, and a perfect complement to express the passion to keep living.
Your imagery is vivid and stunning and shows a great desire for love and life.
Much enjoyed, Gypsy. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Superb presentation here, and a perfect complement to express the passion to keep living.
Your imagery is vivid and stunning and shows a great desire for love and life.
Much enjoyed, Gypsy. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 23-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Thank you, Gloria, I appreciate your kind review. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
It would be sad to die without knowing love. Once again, your presentation is perfect. You are so talented. I know it's God given talent and we are blessed that you choose to share it with us.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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It would be sad to die without knowing love. Once again, your presentation is perfect. You are so talented. I know it's God given talent and we are blessed that you choose to share it with us.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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Thank you, Barbara. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Ulla
Aw, I can so identify with this wonderful poem, Marival. No, she doesn't want to die before she's experienced her love fulfilled with the man she loves. What a beautiful free verse. Un abrazo, Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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Aw, I can so identify with this wonderful poem, Marival. No, she doesn't want to die before she's experienced her love fulfilled with the man she loves. What a beautiful free verse. Un abrazo, Ulla xcx
Comment Written 21-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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Gracias, guapa, I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem ((*=*))
besitos y abrazos
MariVal
Comment from Allieas
such a powerful and intense poem. I feel the passion and sense of fleeting time and unsaid words put to paper. Maybe that's just me reading into it, but I enjoyed this a lot. Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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such a powerful and intense poem. I feel the passion and sense of fleeting time and unsaid words put to paper. Maybe that's just me reading into it, but I enjoyed this a lot. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 21-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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Yes, you understand the poem well.
Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful day or night.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
i like the refrain line
and the theme was very interesting
i do hope she finds "him"...
nice imagery and smooth flow throughout
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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i like the refrain line
and the theme was very interesting
i do hope she finds "him"...
nice imagery and smooth flow throughout
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 21-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful day or night.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
We are thinking about death in this poem. Being afraid of dying is not a good thing, but your poem explains how the woman cannot leave the love of her life behind. So gorgeous is the image and words you wrote.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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We are thinking about death in this poem. Being afraid of dying is not a good thing, but your poem explains how the woman cannot leave the love of her life behind. So gorgeous is the image and words you wrote.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful day or night.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Absolutely beautiful pictures here. And you write your poetry very well. You evoke strong emotional ties. We women like to tell our stories. Have a good week. :-) Karen
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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Absolutely beautiful pictures here. And you write your poetry very well. You evoke strong emotional ties. We women like to tell our stories. Have a good week. :-) Karen
Comment Written 21-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful day or night.
Gypsy hugsThank you very much for the excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful day or night.
Gypsy hugs
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Enjoy your week. Karen
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Gypsy, your poem is heartfelt and has good imagery within, especially:
covered with goosebumps. Before any of us die, we all have desires that we want to fulfill. Beautiful presentation. Well done. Xo. M
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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Hi Gypsy, your poem is heartfelt and has good imagery within, especially:
covered with goosebumps. Before any of us die, we all have desires that we want to fulfill. Beautiful presentation. Well done. Xo. M
Comment Written 21-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful day or night.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
You used the repeated line artfully! And I don't want you to die! But of course, I know what you mean. I like the way you describe passion even not the self but the beloved whose skin is covered with goosebumps!
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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You used the repeated line artfully! And I don't want you to die! But of course, I know what you mean. I like the way you describe passion even not the self but the beloved whose skin is covered with goosebumps!
Comment Written 21-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much for the excellent review, big sister. Have a wonderful day.
Love,
MariVal
Comment from kahpot
So beautifully sad, I read that someone is running out of time to express, their emotions, or to win affection with such sad news, as always very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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So beautifully sad, I read that someone is running out of time to express, their emotions, or to win affection with such sad news, as always very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 20-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful day or night.
Gypsy hugs
