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Comment from Jumbo J

Exceptional

This work has reached the exceptional level

Hi MariVal,
I don't know how I missed this blood pattern on the page... well, that's a lie... I miss way too many of your magic creations my dear friend... sorry 'bout that!

Okay, I am pressed for time once again... as if time is on a quickened state of revolutions. Everything is closing in and well, my emotional state needs work... but that is another story in the saga of me.

So, for me to go in to your profile to choose something to read that I have missed... this poem came up straight away, as so often happens when something is meant to be.

I loved reading this so much my dear talented wordsmith.

I played the song 'God we need you now' this morning as a call for help! My father's memorial is this coming Friday, and let's just say, I'm struggling. No, not for the loss so much, but everything around the loss... and the fact of having to write something and get up in front of people to blurt my thoughts like some kind of injured goat that sits in life with memories that keep echoing.

So, you see, reading what you have written within this poem seems so appropriately perfect within its timing.
Love saves all... especially when its eternal and from the source of all our beginnings and endings'.

This is indeed so beautiful MariVal...

Tienes un fan y amigo de por vida que valora nuestra conexión.

With our thoughts we create...
an open line of connection.

Warmest regards,
James.

Comment Written 09-Mar-2024

reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024

I was wondering how you found this one. I like it too and I forgot about it. I write so much it scapes through my fingers. My writing is a stream of consciousness that flows through the fanstory pages. I have many bad ones but once in a while I write something like this one. I probably sound conceited... I don't mean it that way. To me creativity flows from a higher power through me.

I know you are going through a very difficult time and it breaks my heart. I pray for you every night but pain is not always bad. It sounds like you are going through growing pains. Please, be kind with yourself. Maybe write a letter to your father and put everything you are feeling on paper... for your eyes only.

I know you will be great. Try to turn it to the care of our divine source.... it helps me. But you know best. What helps me doesn't necessarily help everybody else. Regardless of what you write, BE KIND TO YOURSELF.

You don't know how much I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem with everything you got going on.... please don't apologize to me. I know you.

Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review. Is a stellar icing on the cake. (*�*) ❤️

Mi mejor amigo para siempre. Con mucho cari�o.

Marival
"When in darkness, look for the light."- the last of us

Comment from Navada

Excellent

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I love the way you have expressed your devotion here through exploring the elements of nature and recounting the ways God has operated in your life. I'm sosorry for the difficulties you have experienced and delighted that you have support from loved ones in your life now.

Comment Written 05-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024

Most people didn't get it...c'est la vie

Thank you very much, my friend. Have a wonderful weekend.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Hi MariVal,
I like the repetition you used to tell of all the reasons you love God. You say it is inspired by the New Testament and what the Apostles taught . It also reminds my of the Psalms in the Old Testaments.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan

Comment Written 04-Jan-2024