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2023 Gypsy's Tanka

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8 total reviews 
Comment from kiwigirl2821
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You write a lot of these Gypsy, but this one is outstanding! It looks pretty, reads beautifully and is a joy to have come across this morning. Love it my friend! xx deborah

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Amen!! Yes, each snowflake is different as each person is unique, yet the different snowflakes make beauty. Wouldn't if be wonderful we humans could realize that together we're all beautiful. Thank you for sharing not only your talent but your wisdom with us.

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
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What a wonderful tanka, Gypsy. I definitely dislike hate and bigotry, those two do not belong together. What a wonderful poem. Very well done and sadly but greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Blessed be

    Gypsy hugs
reply by aryr on 28-Dec-2023
    You are so very welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from dovemarie
Exceptional
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Hi Gypsy, short beautiful poems always attract me and make me feel good. It's easier to review them than the longer ones like nonet or sonnet. You used your colors beautifully in your verses, and your pictures are always lovely too! Dove

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023
    Thank you very much for your exceptiona six stars review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
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this should be a poster. . . everywhere. . .
wonderful gogyohka with a great message
love the colours! good imagery and smooth flow

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
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It's a great example! Each snowflake is uniquely beautiful and none of them reject the other for the differences. My favorite snowflake quote was by Stanislaw Lec "In an avalanche, no single snowflake feels responsible." That's like humanity in its mob mentality.

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2023
    I love the quote.

    Thank you, big sister. I appreciate your insightful review.

    Love

    Marival
Comment from patcelaw
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This is she had another beautiful wedding that you have done. Enjoyed it very much. Your presentation is beautiful. I wish you a very happy new year and a blessed week this week.

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Yardier
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Lovely poem. It's so true isn't it? Snow flakes and Holstein dairy cows patterns are unique. The structure and markings are never the same, yet they look as if they could be. Your poem points how people are the same yet they're prone to hatred and bigotry. Bigots should take a lesson from dairy cows. I don't think Holsteins hate Swiss cows.
Well, maybe.... perhaps that's where we get Butter Milk.

All the best, Yard.

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs