Aiona's Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 169 "First to Take it With Him"Because my portfolio is too messy and I have OCD.
2 total reviews
Comment from Wendyanne
So Heaven's paved with gold lol. This is a delightful little poem in which you have described someone obsessed with money who finds the need to take it with him after death. I enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2023
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So Heaven's paved with gold lol. This is a delightful little poem in which you have described someone obsessed with money who finds the need to take it with him after death. I enjoyed it.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2023
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Thanks for your review, Wendyanne. I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from JPGeo
This has everything I love about a rhyming poem. The rhymes and meter are nice and there's an underlying message with humor. To paraphrase, everything we think we know in life, is an absurdity.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023
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This has everything I love about a rhyming poem. The rhymes and meter are nice and there's an underlying message with humor. To paraphrase, everything we think we know in life, is an absurdity.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023
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Thanks for your review, JPGeo. Sorry I took so long to respond. I had to leave your review in my inbox to remind me to review your Bachelor poem when I had more sixes! I am glad I'm not the only one who likes to write in rhyme and meter.