Comment from Pam Lonsdale

Excellent

Love the alliterations here - and they aren't forced, but fit perfectly into the message that you've written here.

Beautiful presentation! Good luck in the contest.

Pam

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023

Thanks Pam

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

This is excellent work for the challenge. Your presentation is very good. You use expressive words and colorful imagery that readers will enjoy. I enjoyed the alliteration, too!

Best wishes,

Alex

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023

Thanks Alexandra