2023 Gypsy's Tanka
Viewing comments for Chapter 54 "When my Bride Blossoms"-
7 total reviews
Comment from aryr
This was definitely a Gogyohka tanka, Gypsy. Your words showed the bride-to-be was brave and joyous, she faced becoming a wife. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. The pictures were perfect. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2023
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This was definitely a Gogyohka tanka, Gypsy. Your words showed the bride-to-be was brave and joyous, she faced becoming a wife. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. The pictures were perfect. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 14-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much. I hope you are having a wonderful weekend.
blessed be
gypsy hugs
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Most welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from shelley kaye
the girl in the pic does not look happy...
a great gogyohka with good imagery and a smooth flow of words
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2023
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the girl in the pic does not look happy...
a great gogyohka with good imagery and a smooth flow of words
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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Comment Written 13-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was very sensual yet in a pure way. The love is clear in this. It isnt carnal its a true love that is culminated in their bodily union. This was very bold and vivid. Thank you for sharing. Gretchen
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2023
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This was very sensual yet in a pure way. The love is clear in this. It isnt carnal its a true love that is culminated in their bodily union. This was very bold and vivid. Thank you for sharing. Gretchen
Comment Written 12-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Teri7
Gypsy, this is a very interesting and very well written poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery. Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2023
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Gypsy, this is a very interesting and very well written poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery. Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 12-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy, and I'm shocked, SHOCKED to read such an explicit poem about a subject I should know the meaning of but so far I'm drawing a blank!
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2023
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Another fine poem, Gypsy, and I'm shocked, SHOCKED to read such an explicit poem about a subject I should know the meaning of but so far I'm drawing a blank!
Comment Written 12-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2023
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LoL sorry, Mike :)
Thank you very much for taking the time to review my poem.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
Cherry blossoms symbolize a woman's physical beauty so the reference to spring and to cherries fits this Japanese tradition. Great use of alliteration and references to senses!
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2023
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Cherry blossoms symbolize a woman's physical beauty so the reference to spring and to cherries fits this Japanese tradition. Great use of alliteration and references to senses!
Comment Written 12-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2023
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Big Sister,
Thank you very much for taking the time to review my poem.
Love,
marival
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And I reread your story changes! I liked your edits!
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Thank you for taking the time to reread my poem.
Love
Marival
Comment from barbara.wilkey
The artwork you chose for this poem is gorgeous. Once again, your presentation is unequaled to any. Beautiful poem and beautiful artwork. Thank you for giving us the opportunity to enjoy it.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2023
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The artwork you chose for this poem is gorgeous. Once again, your presentation is unequaled to any. Beautiful poem and beautiful artwork. Thank you for giving us the opportunity to enjoy it.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2023
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Barbara,
Thank you very much for taking the time to review my poem.
Gypsy hugs