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Love Morning..

We need to take care of our home

3 total reviews 
Comment from Lisasview
Excellent
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Fabulous words for your poem entry dear Tempeste ...
And, such a fantastic image that really says it all.
I wish you the very best of luck in your Diatelle contest,
Lisasview

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2023

reply by the author on 25-Sep-2023
    Ciao!,

    glad you enjoyed reading my poem on what mankind must do to survive.

    Gloomy is not a theme most want to read about.

    I always try to find a good pic to showcase my words even though I know poetry shouldn't need any. (wink)

    I hope you are well?
reply by Lisasview on 25-Sep-2023
    I am well, trying to write another poem today.
    I did post a few..Did you see them on my portfolio.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2023
    What is the topic of the one you are trying to write..is it for a contest or just a personal poem you want to share?
reply by Lisasview on 25-Sep-2023
    Well I do have a couple in that I posted.. Did you read them. You will need to look at my portfolio.
    The one I am writing today is going to be another Sonnet and of course about love...
    Thank you so much for asking
Comment from Kaiku
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

How is it that you only received 1 review for this very insightful work? In a way I am somewhat thankful that my term on this earth is of a limited nature. Not sure I want to witness the increasing chaos and angst all living creatures will endure going forward.

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2023

reply by the author on 25-Sep-2023
    Thanks for the kind words...

    I presume gloomy, dark topics are not very popular.. people prefer to believe that the world is healthy and people are thriving.

    Thanks for the encouraging score.
Comment from Eleri
Excellent
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I like this poem and the ideas expressed in it. Your rhyming is good and has the correct sequence for the form but your second line has three syllables in it when it should have two as 'scented' has two syllables and in line eight it should be 'persists' not 'persist'. Apart for these small points, this is a good poem so good luck in the contest
Eleri

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2023

reply by the author on 17-Sep-2023
    oooppps , thank you for the helpful feedback'

    Last minute I wrote scented.

    Glad you liked the theme of my wee poem.