Comment from Lisasview

Excellent

I did like this one of your Bill... The color choice and image are perfect...
I have never tried a Nanny poem...
Looks like such fun,
Lisa, new to the site

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2023

Thank you, Lisa, for giving this a look. Bill

Comment from Goodadvicechan

Excellent

We learn something new everyday. Thank you for explaining to us what Nan Poem is.

You have written four strong sentences to describe a scary battle. You chose a scary picture too.

Again thanks for sharing this piece with us.

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023

Thank you, Chan

Comment from Lyle Nußbaum

Excellent

I enjoyed the non-traditional topic choice. The poem is concise and tells a story that is accentuated by the picture. I like how the color scheme tied everything together.
Well done.

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023

Thank you, Lyle

Comment from Mia Twysted

Excellent

Monsters. You fight a demon, a creature, and when you think you have it made or are winning, a new threat comes out of nowhere to start a new battle. That is what I am taking from this piece. I had to read it several times to gain that understanding, but I could feel the darkness within the work the whole time.

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023

Thank you, Mia, for the great review.

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello,

Excellent entry for the
Naani Poem writing prompt contest.

It's very well done. I love the words imagery and beautiful presentation. Good syllables count and connection between lines.

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023

Thank you, Gypsy

Comment from Andrea Kepple

Exceptional

I like how your poem really works on several levels. There is the level that matches the picture you put with it. There is also a deeper level that can be applied to the reader and their emotions or other challenges they face in their lives.

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023

Thank you, Andrea, for your kind and astute review.

Comment from Lea Tonin1

Excellent

Very cool post neat and provocative picture too! You're probably very well done with the exquisite word choice along with the very dramatic picture it makes for an effective package!
A very good example of Naani poem, correct syllable count and a great presentation. I think it's a good submission for the contest.
I see no issues with grammar or esthetics and no need to change anything as far as I could tell great job. I wish you all the best hope your evening is great!

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023

Thanks, Lea

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Wow, this is a strong message here! Your verse reads with flowing and almost biblical sentiments and there is a warning here, perhaps, that, although we believe we have beaten the monsters of the past, the greatest sea monster of all awaits us from the deep! Quite an ominous prediction for the world told in impressive detail with stunning image! Thanks for sharing and good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023

Thank you, Debbie

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

These monsters might be nightmares that the sufferer copes with and this is a rather dark write for the contest, a chilling and scary post, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023

Thank you, Dolly

Comment from Nicki Nance

Excellent

This is a perfect poem for this format. The graphic is gorgeous and your presentation is beautiful. This is skillfully written. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023

Thank you, Nicki