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Viewing comments for Chapter 45 "Leave The past Behind."
Poems of Random wandering; an inward look.
2 total reviews
Comment from
Aaron Milavec
Dear Niyuta,
This well-crafted poem has some promise. A husband and father slowly separates himself from his family. There are hints of complexity and of anguish, but I never hear this being portrayed in the words. In the end, I don't connect with him or with any of the other characters.
Peace and joy in telling your story,
Aaron
Comment Written 07-May-2023
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
Thanks Aaaron: Didn't understand portraying in the words comment. It's only an expression of conflicting thoughts about how to manage the emotional storm caused by events like an exclusion from a family event.
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JT traveller
This is a great poem made even better by referencing my favourite book, Siddhartha. A well spun tale, beautifully presented with clarity. It expresses a range of emotions. A great poem.
Comment Written 07-May-2023
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
I am honored. I was worried my words would not convey my message of how to deal with emotional storms in a fulfilling ways. Thanks again.
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