Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

This set of poems remind me of the passage in Ecclesiastes that there is a season for everything. And even if there are times or tears and falls, we can keep "standing tall" with help from God.

 Comment Written 02-May-2023

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reply by the author on 02-May-2023

Thanks!

Comment from Paul McFarland

Excellent

This mixed meter poem reads fairly smoothly, and I think this is one of your best efforts. The topic you have chosen is excellent and the picture goes very well with the poem.

 Comment Written 02-May-2023

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reply by the author on 02-May-2023

Thanks!

reply by the author on 02-May-2023

Thanks! I am keeping the other poem the way it is.

reply by Paul McFarland on 02-May-2023

I still have faith in you.

reply by the author on 02-May-2023

I am doing great!

reply by Paul McFarland on 02-May-2023

You'll be doing great when I give you six stars.

reply by the author on 02-May-2023

You should

reply by Paul McFarland on 02-May-2023

Let me know when you want your next lesson.

reply by the author on 02-May-2023

I don't want one.

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

yup! just like the song says, there's a time for everything...

a great poem! thank you for sharing it with a cool clock, too

shelley :)

 Comment Written 02-May-2023

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reply by the author on 02-May-2023

Thanks!

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written rhyming poem you have penned. It makes me think of a chapter in the Bible. The art work you chose goes very well with your words. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 02-May-2023

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reply by the author on 02-May-2023

Thanks!

reply by Teri7 on 02-May-2023

you are welcome!

reply by the author on 02-May-2023

😊

reply by Teri7 on 02-May-2023

😊

reply by the author on 02-May-2023

Please my high school graduation story needs a boost. Love you!

reply by Teri7 on 03-May-2023

I believe I reviewed your work.

reply by the author on 03-May-2023

You didn't vote for me. You 😟usually do. Graduation story.

reply by Teri7 on 03-May-2023

I voted for you on another contest. I have to vote for the one that is on my heart to vote for!

reply by the author on 03-May-2023

You voted for me in the back went out contest.

reply by the author on 03-May-2023

I changed it.