Dancing Delight
5-7-5 about Autumn4 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Love the motion words you used! And the dance of autumn leaves are a thrill to watch. I liked the "dance 'til they drop" with the double meaning of dropping. Congrats on your third place finish!
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Love the motion words you used! And the dance of autumn leaves are a thrill to watch. I liked the "dance 'til they drop" with the double meaning of dropping. Congrats on your third place finish!
Comment Written 18-Apr-2023
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
What a glorious picture! Good luck for your writing prompt poem directly about autumn. I feel those eddies of gusty wind and watch the rivers of dead leaves piling up on my patio! This is a skilful response to the prompt challenge. Giddy ð???
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What a glorious picture! Good luck for your writing prompt poem directly about autumn. I feel those eddies of gusty wind and watch the rivers of dead leaves piling up on my patio! This is a skilful response to the prompt challenge. Giddy ð???
Comment Written 15-Apr-2023
Comment from kiwisteveh
Wow! Lovely entry for this contest. I like how you maintained the dancing metaphor throughout and the excellent double meaning in the final line.
This should do well in the contest. Good luck.
Steve
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Wow! Lovely entry for this contest. I like how you maintained the dancing metaphor throughout and the excellent double meaning in the final line.
This should do well in the contest. Good luck.
Steve
Comment Written 15-Apr-2023
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery and alliteration.
-Good description of the wind and
personification of the leaves.
-A good concluding line.
-Good luck in the contest.
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-Nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery and alliteration.
-Good description of the wind and
personification of the leaves.
-A good concluding line.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2023