Ancient Art of Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 31 "Invasion"A compilation of poems
27 total reviews
Comment from country ranch writer
Putin is an out and out narcissism coward killing women and children bombing them out if house and home to just leave the all lie dead in the streets.he has no right to be on this earth and he better get to digging his own grave before it's to late and find him hiding in his so called war underground domain that supposed to be impossible to breach.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2023
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Putin is an out and out narcissism coward killing women and children bombing them out if house and home to just leave the all lie dead in the streets.he has no right to be on this earth and he better get to digging his own grave before it's to late and find him hiding in his so called war underground domain that supposed to be impossible to breach.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2023
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Thank you I agree! I appreciate you stopping by having a read thank you so much And I hope your day is amazing!
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Same for you🦋🦋🦋
Comment from Michelle D. Carr
Thank you for this poem. Yes, so many suffered who had no choice since the leaders make decisions out of their own need for power. That is always the way of any war. Great topic and excellent writing.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2023
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Thank you for this poem. Yes, so many suffered who had no choice since the leaders make decisions out of their own need for power. That is always the way of any war. Great topic and excellent writing.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2023
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Thank you, Michelle, I really appreciate your kind words and your review. Thank you for stopping by and having a read. Every review is important to me as is yours so I appreciate your time and I hope you have a great day!
Comment from Bruce Carrington
You described brutality, pain and war in contrastingly beautiful way. Subject's close to my heart due to my line of work and I'm saving it for later. Great job, Lea.
"grandiose entitlement
with imagined greatness"
- Gave me a lot to think about. Aren't we all get lost in engrossed entitlements and false imagination? Absolutely fantastic. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2023
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You described brutality, pain and war in contrastingly beautiful way. Subject's close to my heart due to my line of work and I'm saving it for later. Great job, Lea.
"grandiose entitlement
with imagined greatness"
- Gave me a lot to think about. Aren't we all get lost in engrossed entitlements and false imagination? Absolutely fantastic. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2023
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Thank you so much Bruce for your kind review. I very much appreciate it. I'm happy that you stopped by for a read! My son too is in that line of work! And be safe and careful out there. Thank you again for your review and kind comments talk to you again!
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Yup, you got the syllable count right and the despicable human being that is Putin. "Imagined greatness" is correct - who but himself could possibly consider him a great man.
Great overall presentation - good luck with this contest.
Pam
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2023
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Yup, you got the syllable count right and the despicable human being that is Putin. "Imagined greatness" is correct - who but himself could possibly consider him a great man.
Great overall presentation - good luck with this contest.
Pam
Comment Written 30-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2023
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Thank you, Pam, I'm really glad as always that you like this. You are a reduce are important and I take them seriously and I'm always happy to receive. Ti'm not putting user needs to get his a** kicked!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
This poem has a very interesting message between the lines and an unique melody: deceit - flashing bright -entitlement - greatness - neighbor down - dark God - injustice- creates hell, in other words I can foresee a world upside down.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2023
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This poem has a very interesting message between the lines and an unique melody: deceit - flashing bright -entitlement - greatness - neighbor down - dark God - injustice- creates hell, in other words I can foresee a world upside down.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2023
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You are very insightful and good on you. Beautiful thing to have, especially for a poet or a writer. Your review and your kind comments I appreciate very much!
Hope have a great evening!
Comment from Douglas Goff
This is a great #50 post. You said a lot in very few words.
I like the line that injustice creates hell. This is true on every level of society.
Good stuff Lea.
D
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2023
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This is a great #50 post. You said a lot in very few words.
I like the line that injustice creates hell. This is true on every level of society.
Good stuff Lea.
D
Comment Written 24-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2023
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Thank you so much, Douglas! I'm glad you liked it! I thank you also for your kind comments! I hope this ends soon!
Comment from Rachelle Allen
First, CONGRATULATIONS on this milestone post!
Second, what an excellent offering it is! A dark and cautionary expression of the evils that lurk at the border...all framed in a perfectly-counted Nonet. I'm betting this will do VERY nicely in the contest. Good luck to you!
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2023
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First, CONGRATULATIONS on this milestone post!
Second, what an excellent offering it is! A dark and cautionary expression of the evils that lurk at the border...all framed in a perfectly-counted Nonet. I'm betting this will do VERY nicely in the contest. Good luck to you!
Comment Written 24-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2023
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Thank you so much Rachel! So glad you liked it! Your heartfelt congrats I am grateful! I thank you for your time and your insight as well!
Hope your day is grand!
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Right back atcha, Miss Talent! xo
Comment from Anne Theriault
Probably worth six stars, but I'm only beginning reading. Powerful poetry and excellent use of words. Would have preferred you hadn't capitalized God as He is a real person.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2023
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Probably worth six stars, but I'm only beginning reading. Powerful poetry and excellent use of words. Would have preferred you hadn't capitalized God as He is a real person.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2023
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Interesting perspective thank you very much! Thank you so much for your kind review and welcome to fanstory! I appreciate your comments and taking the time to read my poem! Hope your evening is grand!
Comment from sweetthanesue
Summed up perfectly...why men kill us and each other is way beyond my comprehension as a woman but I guess we are here to love and nurture. Greed is absolutely the darkness and too misused power. Good insight.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2023
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Summed up perfectly...why men kill us and each other is way beyond my comprehension as a woman but I guess we are here to love and nurture. Greed is absolutely the darkness and too misused power. Good insight.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2023
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Thank you very much for your kind review and for your thoughtful comments. I appreciate it and totally agree! Thank you again and I hope your day is grand!
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Welcome...have great week
Comment from Pearl Edwards
A dramatic and powerful descriptive Nonet about Putin's malevolence Lea, and the scary thing with the latest news was when I heard 'experts' say the two waiting in the wings behind him are worse than he is for being power hungry. Good luck in the contest, and congrats on post 50. Very well written.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2023
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A dramatic and powerful descriptive Nonet about Putin's malevolence Lea, and the scary thing with the latest news was when I heard 'experts' say the two waiting in the wings behind him are worse than he is for being power hungry. Good luck in the contest, and congrats on post 50. Very well written.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 24-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2023
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Thank you so much I really appreciate it so much as always Valda. Correct russia sensitivity filled black negativity and Power hungry maniac i'm going to run things. I appreciate a review on your encycle words. Always appreciating your time too and hope your evening is grand!