Soft whispers
haiku34 total reviews
Comment from Carol Clark2
A lovely word picture in this haiku, Melissa. I'm sorry I'm behind in reviewing; I was visiting my sister in PA. She has cancer and finished her chemo treatments while I was there. Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
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A lovely word picture in this haiku, Melissa. I'm sorry I'm behind in reviewing; I was visiting my sister in PA. She has cancer and finished her chemo treatments while I was there. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 17-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
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Hello Carol. I am so sorry to read that your sister is so sick. I pray that the Lord touch her and heal her!!! Thanks so much for your wonderful review!! Hugs.
Melissa
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Thanks so much for your prayers. She's facing surgery mid-July. She's amazingly calm and trusting God about everything.
Comment from Mark D. R.
Melissa,
This poem feels like a Lune. Although I favor centered lines as my standard format, maybe your verse would benefit from a left alignment.
Your poem whispers to me. You selected a terror image to pair with your verse.
Mark
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
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Melissa,
This poem feels like a Lune. Although I favor centered lines as my standard format, maybe your verse would benefit from a left alignment.
Your poem whispers to me. You selected a terror image to pair with your verse.
Mark
Comment Written 16-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
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Hi Mark. Thanks so much, my friend, for your lovely review. It would be fun to write a Lune. I may see if I can put one together. Thanks again.
Melissa
Comment from Raul1
I think that you do write well in poetry. I am impressed by your skills. Your poem is wonderful. Exceptional work! No mistakes found. I like it. Thank you for sharing! Awesome!
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
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I think that you do write well in poetry. I am impressed by your skills. Your poem is wonderful. Exceptional work! No mistakes found. I like it. Thank you for sharing! Awesome!
Comment Written 15-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
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Hello Raul. Thanks so much!!
Melissa
Comment from Anne Johnston
What a beautiful picture you have chosen, and your words so aptly describe the moon leaning into the trees, whispering soft secrets. Very well done on this.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
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What a beautiful picture you have chosen, and your words so aptly describe the moon leaning into the trees, whispering soft secrets. Very well done on this.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
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Hello Anne. Thank you so much for your lovely review!!!
Melissa
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You are very welcome
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
An awesome poem with a great presentation and imagery of the moon scene. I like your satori...."bewitching the earth". It flows well with beautifully descriptive words that paint a clear poetic vision..
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." - Novalis
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
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An awesome poem with a great presentation and imagery of the moon scene. I like your satori...."bewitching the earth". It flows well with beautifully descriptive words that paint a clear poetic vision..
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." - Novalis
Comment Written 15-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much, Gypsy for the lovely review!!
Melissa
Comment from jessizero
I enjoyed your haiku. It's a nice and romantic image of the moon whispering to the breeze and bewitching the earth. Thank you for sharing this here.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
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I enjoyed your haiku. It's a nice and romantic image of the moon whispering to the breeze and bewitching the earth. Thank you for sharing this here.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
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Hi Jess.... thanks so much for the wonderful review.
Melissa
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
This is a beautiful haiku. I enjoyed it very much. I liked especially the personification of the moon, whispering poetry, no less, to the earth! I wish you good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
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This is a beautiful haiku. I enjoyed it very much. I liked especially the personification of the moon, whispering poetry, no less, to the earth! I wish you good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
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Hello Verna. Thank you so very much for your lovely review!!
Melissa
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Soft whispers', is short and deftly descriptive. Each short line is woven with the golden threads of truth. This talented poet's work is certainly worth a six. I look forward to seeing your next piece.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
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'Soft whispers', is short and deftly descriptive. Each short line is woven with the golden threads of truth. This talented poet's work is certainly worth a six. I look forward to seeing your next piece.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
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Hello Duchess. Thanks so much for your wonderful review. Hugs!!!
Melissa
Hello Melissa. Hugs to you. You certainly deserved it.
Bless you and take care,
the Duchess
Comment from leather
This is a striking combination of haiku and illustration. The image is spectacular. It looks like the moon is leaning in to whisper to the trees. Great presentation.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
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This is a striking combination of haiku and illustration. The image is spectacular. It looks like the moon is leaning in to whisper to the trees. Great presentation.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
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Hello Leather. Thanks so much!!
Melissa
Comment from judiverse
This is a lovely presentation. The picture of the moon is great. Very creative imagery in your poem, with the moon whispering sonnets to the breeze. "Bewitching" works in beautifully. It is a magical scene. The trees look pretty eerie in the picture as they're shown against the moon. Best of luck in the contest. judi
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
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This is a lovely presentation. The picture of the moon is great. Very creative imagery in your poem, with the moon whispering sonnets to the breeze. "Bewitching" works in beautifully. It is a magical scene. The trees look pretty eerie in the picture as they're shown against the moon. Best of luck in the contest. judi
Comment Written 14-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
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Thanks so much, Judi for your wonderful comments. Hugs!!
Melissa
