Destined Wind Blows
Haiku contest11 total reviews
Comment from mermaids
Your words give me a good feeling. I can see the moon watching over the dragonfly. Excellent four line poem that brings forth feelings and emotions and creates a feel for nature.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
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Your words give me a good feeling. I can see the moon watching over the dragonfly. Excellent four line poem that brings forth feelings and emotions and creates a feel for nature.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
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Thank you
Comment from dragonpoet
What a beautiful piece of artwork. Is this poem inspired by the artwork or were you lucky enough to find the perfect picture to illustrate the image in your poem.
Keep writing and stay heatlhy
Good luck in the contest.
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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What a beautiful piece of artwork. Is this poem inspired by the artwork or were you lucky enough to find the perfect picture to illustrate the image in your poem.
Keep writing and stay heatlhy
Good luck in the contest.
dragonpoet
Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Thank you-Strange but true I was lucky to have found a beautiful dragonfly picture
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You are most kindly welcome, Magic.
dragonpoet
Comment from jaded831
Great entry for this four line poem contest. Like the dragonfly the beauty of nature mesmerizes us all. Those not taking the time to appreciate what this world has to offer don't know what they are missing. Your poem reflects this notion in four simple lines. Great job.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Great entry for this four line poem contest. Like the dragonfly the beauty of nature mesmerizes us all. Those not taking the time to appreciate what this world has to offer don't know what they are missing. Your poem reflects this notion in four simple lines. Great job.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Thank you
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Dragonflies are such sweet innocent insects and we have huge ones in the canaries called red vein darters. There is a calm peace inside these words that I want to take straight to my heart, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Dragonflies are such sweet innocent insects and we have huge ones in the canaries called red vein darters. There is a calm peace inside these words that I want to take straight to my heart, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Thank you
Comment from kiwisteveh
Nice imagery in your poem to match the beautiful artwork. You paint a lovely word picture of this natural scene with a slight touch of romantic wistfulness thrown in.
Good luck in the contest.
Steve
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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Nice imagery in your poem to match the beautiful artwork. You paint a lovely word picture of this natural scene with a slight touch of romantic wistfulness thrown in.
Good luck in the contest.
Steve
Comment Written 27-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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Thank you
Comment from Moon baby
Ahh, this is so pretty! You came up with a great idea and the perfect artwork to match! Really this is done very nicely and I enjoyed reading it! Dragonflies are one of my favorite insects that let me know summer has arrived!
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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Ahh, this is so pretty! You came up with a great idea and the perfect artwork to match! Really this is done very nicely and I enjoyed reading it! Dragonflies are one of my favorite insects that let me know summer has arrived!
Comment Written 27-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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Thank you
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
I love dragonflies and I love your poem about them. You did a nice job with the prompt and this is a good contest entry. It should do well as it conveys a story in only a few words.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2022
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I love dragonflies and I love your poem about them. You did a nice job with the prompt and this is a good contest entry. It should do well as it conveys a story in only a few words.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2022
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Thank you
Comment from Carlos' girl
This is nice until i get to " resting place". I could think of a million for poetic choices that don't suggest death or a bed. It doesnt flow with the beauty you create in the rest of the poem
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2022
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This is nice until i get to " resting place". I could think of a million for poetic choices that don't suggest death or a bed. It doesnt flow with the beauty you create in the rest of the poem
Comment Written 21-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2022
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Thank you for you review-I will re-read and maybe see If I like something else.
Comment from RodG
You have created a scene of a dragonfly hovering in the moonlight this reader can easily visualize while following the line requirements this prompt exactly. A lovely artwork enhances your presentation. Rod
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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You have created a scene of a dragonfly hovering in the moonlight this reader can easily visualize while following the line requirements this prompt exactly. A lovely artwork enhances your presentation. Rod
Comment Written 21-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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Thank you
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Very descriptive and the picture really compliments what you are saying - there's a glow to the picture that could come from the "moon shines". Nice job conveying a scene in just 4 lines.
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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2022
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Very descriptive and the picture really compliments what you are saying - there's a glow to the picture that could come from the "moon shines". Nice job conveying a scene in just 4 lines.
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Comment Written 20-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2022
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Thank you
