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A philosophical poem60 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
Sorry to have missed this one earlier. Outstanding poem and a wonderful question as we look upon the Earth today. Truth is not subjective, nor is it altered, although the wicked try. That is why I like irrefutable DNA evidence: there is nothing more to be said. Blood doesn't lie.
Nor does the Son of God or the Word of God--a truth that never changes. Numbers 23:19~ God is not a man that He should lie....
The rest of the fallen world is up for grabs.
Jesus said, "I am the way, I am the truth... I am the life. No one comes to the Father except through me."
It's pretty clear where truth is found. I seek it out daily.
Sending you my best for this marvelous poem,
Sal XOs...
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2022
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Sorry to have missed this one earlier. Outstanding poem and a wonderful question as we look upon the Earth today. Truth is not subjective, nor is it altered, although the wicked try. That is why I like irrefutable DNA evidence: there is nothing more to be said. Blood doesn't lie.
Nor does the Son of God or the Word of God--a truth that never changes. Numbers 23:19~ God is not a man that He should lie....
The rest of the fallen world is up for grabs.
Jesus said, "I am the way, I am the truth... I am the life. No one comes to the Father except through me."
It's pretty clear where truth is found. I seek it out daily.
Sending you my best for this marvelous poem,
Sal XOs...
Comment Written 14-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2022
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Thanks for truly very kind comments and a splendid review, blessings Roy
Comment from scongrove
Very wise words, my friend! :) I believe we are driven to seek truth. Instead of seeing everything around us that God has created, we want more evidence to believe He exists. When will it be enough? But then, we believe known lying politicians who consistently show their true nature, but most will take his words if offered false promises. Sadly, we are a greedy nation. I will continue to pray for better days.
Thank you for sharing.
Always your fan,
Shana :)
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Very wise words, my friend! :) I believe we are driven to seek truth. Instead of seeing everything around us that God has created, we want more evidence to believe He exists. When will it be enough? But then, we believe known lying politicians who consistently show their true nature, but most will take his words if offered false promises. Sadly, we are a greedy nation. I will continue to pray for better days.
Thank you for sharing.
Always your fan,
Shana :)
Comment Written 06-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Thanks for these fantastic observations my wise friend,
Comment from The Mom/DarleneThomson
Dear Roy,
This was a good poem. I felt the stanza about the salmon was unnecessary, otherwise, it was fine. I personally prefer the truth.
Blessings,
Darlene
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Dear Roy,
This was a good poem. I felt the stanza about the salmon was unnecessary, otherwise, it was fine. I personally prefer the truth.
Blessings,
Darlene
Comment Written 06-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Thanks so much Darlene, for these terrific comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from June Sargent
I wholeheartedly agree with you that many would prefer the lie to the truth - simply because an empty promise is one that offers instant gratification - whereas the truth might mean waiting a little longer for guaranteed results. Eve fell for it..and Adam as well. You have penned some words of wisdom here.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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I wholeheartedly agree with you that many would prefer the lie to the truth - simply because an empty promise is one that offers instant gratification - whereas the truth might mean waiting a little longer for guaranteed results. Eve fell for it..and Adam as well. You have penned some words of wisdom here.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Thanks so much June, for these fantastic comments and a super review, blessings Roy
Comment from karenina
Alas, we are living in a "Twilight Zone" of "alternative facts"--- and society has taken A unique view. Do not teach the truth of our past, less it make others uncomfortable...
How then, do we learn? Has it not been said
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(George Santayana) That "those who do not remember the past are doomed to repeat it?"
The truth ought never be bent to win votes...
We have faithful seeking the light...
We have Qanon followers gathering in Dallas waiting for Kennedy to return...
We're on a slippery slope!
Karenina
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Alas, we are living in a "Twilight Zone" of "alternative facts"--- and society has taken A unique view. Do not teach the truth of our past, less it make others uncomfortable...
How then, do we learn? Has it not been said
by
(George Santayana) That "those who do not remember the past are doomed to repeat it?"
The truth ought never be bent to win votes...
We have faithful seeking the light...
We have Qanon followers gathering in Dallas waiting for Kennedy to return...
We're on a slippery slope!
Karenina
Comment Written 06-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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I guess if JRK was Jesus He will be back hehe. Wonderful review, thanks Jaren, blessings Roy
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Alas, he was not...
I think they are looking with skewed expectations...
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Congrats on your POM win, I?ve had a couple, been awhile though.
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Thanks! I should HOPE you've had more than a couple!
A travesty, if not!
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Thank you, I?ve had a few close, but only a couple,
Comment from pookietoo
Roy, another wonderful rhyming poem. I love all of your poems. Take care and keep sharing these poems. I hope you are doing well. Keep smiling. :) :)
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Roy, another wonderful rhyming poem. I love all of your poems. Take care and keep sharing these poems. I hope you are doing well. Keep smiling. :) :)
Comment Written 06-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Thanks so much for these fantastic comments and a super review, blessings Roy
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Welcome.
Comment from LotusButter
As someone who finds Truth of overwhelming importance and follows it to that place in which it and Love become synonymous and indistinguishable and all words disappear, I enjoyed your first, third, fifth, and eighth stanzas particularly. I suspect few follow Truth as far as it leads, to its ultimate unvarnished conclusion, which inspires awe, humility, and intense gratitude. If more did so, there would be a lot less conversation and a lot more exchanging of smiles and knowing nods in this life. When being scrupulously honest, I remember to take with a huge grain of salt any reported history or experience I wasn't part of or wasn't directly shown, inwardly or outwardly. It's very freeing not to believe too many unnecessary things! Best of wishes on your own journey toward Truth, the Absolute, the Deathless, the indescribable. And I enjoyed your rhymes.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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As someone who finds Truth of overwhelming importance and follows it to that place in which it and Love become synonymous and indistinguishable and all words disappear, I enjoyed your first, third, fifth, and eighth stanzas particularly. I suspect few follow Truth as far as it leads, to its ultimate unvarnished conclusion, which inspires awe, humility, and intense gratitude. If more did so, there would be a lot less conversation and a lot more exchanging of smiles and knowing nods in this life. When being scrupulously honest, I remember to take with a huge grain of salt any reported history or experience I wasn't part of or wasn't directly shown, inwardly or outwardly. It's very freeing not to believe too many unnecessary things! Best of wishes on your own journey toward Truth, the Absolute, the Deathless, the indescribable. And I enjoyed your rhymes.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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Thanks so much, for these excellent comments and a lovely review, blessings Roy
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You're very welcome, and blessings to you as well.
Comment from jenintorre
I really love this poem about truth. It is so thought provoking.
I particularly like the last stanza. Wonderful rhyme as always. Best poem I've read in ages. Blessings. Jen.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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I really love this poem about truth. It is so thought provoking.
I particularly like the last stanza. Wonderful rhyme as always. Best poem I've read in ages. Blessings. Jen.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Thanks so much Jen, for these fantastic comments and a super review, blessings Roy
Comment from Pam (respa)
-You always find such great artwork, Roy.
-I have one six star left, and I am happy
to award it to you for this poem.
-I appreciate your notes, too.
-A very good opening verse that sets the tone.
-Effective imagery and rhyme, like
"Our politicians spin and ring,
they seem to dance a flagrant fling."
-I also like the inclusion of nature
toward the end of the poem.
-A good concluding verse, too!
-Very well done.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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-You always find such great artwork, Roy.
-I have one six star left, and I am happy
to award it to you for this poem.
-I appreciate your notes, too.
-A very good opening verse that sets the tone.
-Effective imagery and rhyme, like
"Our politicians spin and ring,
they seem to dance a flagrant fling."
-I also like the inclusion of nature
toward the end of the poem.
-A good concluding verse, too!
-Very well done.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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Thanks Pam, for these most encouraging comments and a great review, blessings Roy
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You are very welcome, Roy. An excellent poem.
Comment from Marty Swan
Loved this poem. Great rhyme and rhythm. I also loved how you're championing absolute truth. However, I didn't quite see how the stanza referring to salmon and birds fit into the whole story. Maybe you could clarify the connection a bit better.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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Loved this poem. Great rhyme and rhythm. I also loved how you're championing absolute truth. However, I didn't quite see how the stanza referring to salmon and birds fit into the whole story. Maybe you could clarify the connection a bit better.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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Thanks Marty, for these thoughtful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
