Revenge
Viewing comments for Chapter 36 "Revenge - Chap 36"Evil stalks the dynamic crime team
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Comment from robyn corum
Carol,
Oooohhh... It's getting hot up in here. *smile* Everything they've all worked for is coming to a head and things could go in a thousand different ways. Tension is great!
Notes:
1.) (")It's Tommy from Francine's. How d'you know I called?"
2.) (")Oh, yeah. What's up?" Tango hoped it was about Moretti.
3.) yelled, "Tommy, the cook(')s looking for you."
4.) Remember, the clock(')s ticking."
5.) Marian said, "(T)he clock was ticking."
Thanks!
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Carol,
Oooohhh... It's getting hot up in here. *smile* Everything they've all worked for is coming to a head and things could go in a thousand different ways. Tension is great!
Notes:
1.) (")It's Tommy from Francine's. How d'you know I called?"
2.) (")Oh, yeah. What's up?" Tango hoped it was about Moretti.
3.) yelled, "Tommy, the cook(')s looking for you."
4.) Remember, the clock(')s ticking."
5.) Marian said, "(T)he clock was ticking."
Thanks!
Comment Written 14-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Thank you so much. Forgive the cut and paste but I am so far behind with showing my appreciation to everyone. Please know it is sincere. This story went in a darker direction than I originally planned (maybe my life got caught up in it) but as we draw closer to the end, I am thrilled that you have continued to follow and enjoy it.
I hope you have the best of holidays. Hugs, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
It's all coming to a head, everyone is in place, now let the party begin! Let's just hope Charles is easy to put out and they can get Jaz out of there. Okay, Carol, I'm completely up to date, so let's get that weasle and put him down like a rabit dog! :)) Well done, my clever friend. Love and hugs. :)) Sandra xxxx
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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It's all coming to a head, everyone is in place, now let the party begin! Let's just hope Charles is easy to put out and they can get Jaz out of there. Okay, Carol, I'm completely up to date, so let's get that weasle and put him down like a rabit dog! :)) Well done, my clever friend. Love and hugs. :)) Sandra xxxx
Comment Written 13-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Thank you so much. Forgive the cut and paste but I am so far behind with showing my appreciation to everyone. Please know it is sincere. This story went in a darker direction than I originally planned (maybe my life got caught up in it) but as we draw closer to the end, I am thrilled that you have continued to follow and enjoy it.
I hope you have the best of holidays. Hugs, Carol
Comment from lyenochka
Great job bringing everything together for a big climax to your plot! It sounds risky to have Cheryl and Marian do everything but hopefully they can sedate Charles. Meanwhile, looks like there's a showdown at Francine's and hope everyone is ready to take down Moretti!
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Great job bringing everything together for a big climax to your plot! It sounds risky to have Cheryl and Marian do everything but hopefully they can sedate Charles. Meanwhile, looks like there's a showdown at Francine's and hope everyone is ready to take down Moretti!
Comment Written 13-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Thank you so much. Forgive the cut and paste but I am so far behind with showing my appreciation to everyone. Please know it is sincere. This story went in a darker direction than I originally planned (maybe my life got caught up in it) but as we draw closer to the end, I am thrilled that you have continued to follow and enjoy it.
I hope you have the best of holidays. Hugs, Carol
Comment from Carol Clark2
Three women partially rescued, and four with their lives on the line. You've got a very complex plot going here. Two fixes: need a dialogue tag (Marian?) on Wait, I'll go. Also at same place, Remember, clock(')s ticking.
Wow, I hope the bad guys are caught and all the ladies rescued. Good writing. Carol
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Three women partially rescued, and four with their lives on the line. You've got a very complex plot going here. Two fixes: need a dialogue tag (Marian?) on Wait, I'll go. Also at same place, Remember, clock(')s ticking.
Wow, I hope the bad guys are caught and all the ladies rescued. Good writing. Carol
Comment Written 12-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Thank you so much. Forgive the cut and paste but I am so far behind with showing my appreciation to everyone. Please know it is sincere. This story went in a darker direction than I originally planned (maybe my life got caught up in it) but as we draw closer to the end, I am thrilled that you have continued to follow and enjoy it.
I hope you have the best of holidays. Hugs, Carol
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The pace at which you're writing this story is amazing, especially with everything in your life. I hope you feel good about this book because it's really good.
Comment from LJbutterfly
It's showtime. The LIGHTS are on, the CAMERA is ready, and the ACTION is about to begin. Everything is in place at Francine's and plans are being made at the mansion. I hope nothing goes wrong, but you being the writer you are, I know you can't guarantee it.
Take a look at this sentence:
"He'd expect you something." (He'd suspect you of something).
See you in the next riveting chapter.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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It's showtime. The LIGHTS are on, the CAMERA is ready, and the ACTION is about to begin. Everything is in place at Francine's and plans are being made at the mansion. I hope nothing goes wrong, but you being the writer you are, I know you can't guarantee it.
Take a look at this sentence:
"He'd expect you something." (He'd suspect you of something).
See you in the next riveting chapter.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Thank you so much. Forgive the cut and paste but I am so far behind with showing my appreciation to everyone. Please know it is sincere. This story went in a darker direction than I originally planned (maybe my life got caught up in it) but as we draw closer to the end, I am thrilled that you have continued to follow and enjoy it.
I hope you have the best of holidays. Hugs, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Everything is lining up for a huge showdown and I can't wait.
Tango laughed, "I hit missed call and dialed your number." (period after /laughed/)
Oh, yeah. What's up?" Tango hoped it was about Moretti. (Missing the beginning quotation marks)
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Everything is lining up for a huge showdown and I can't wait.
Tango laughed, "I hit missed call and dialed your number." (period after /laughed/)
Oh, yeah. What's up?" Tango hoped it was about Moretti. (Missing the beginning quotation marks)
Comment Written 12-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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thanks as always... of course, you know I can't keep my head together and I am always behind of late. Love ya, Carol
Comment from Judy Lawless
This is another nail-biting chapter, Carol. I'm not sure I'm following all that is going on, which makes it more exciting. If I can figure it out ahead of time, it's not so interesting. lol Excellent!
"He'd expect (you) something." - He'd suspect something.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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This is another nail-biting chapter, Carol. I'm not sure I'm following all that is going on, which makes it more exciting. If I can figure it out ahead of time, it's not so interesting. lol Excellent!
"He'd expect (you) something." - He'd suspect something.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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thanks for taking the time to read and review. I am so sorry I have fallen so far behind.
Always, Carol
Comment from BethShelby
It isn't getting any less nerve wracking but I''ll try to relax and let you handle it. You know your stories gets your readers on edge. You are a superb writer of mysteries and crime stories.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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It isn't getting any less nerve wracking but I''ll try to relax and let you handle it. You know your stories gets your readers on edge. You are a superb writer of mysteries and crime stories.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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You are so very kind and right now I need all the support I can get. Thanks Beth for always being there.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
Outvoted by women. Huh, boy, doesn't that sound like a typical state to be in. Of course, I'll leave those type comments where they are, as not to get myself into too much trouble. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Outvoted by women. Huh, boy, doesn't that sound like a typical state to be in. Of course, I'll leave those type comments where they are, as not to get myself into too much trouble. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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You better watch it, my friend. There's a wild storm brewing over her in Illinois and I just my fly past you (without my broom).
Hugs, Carol
Comment from royowen
Things seem to be in pace now for the furthering of procedures, with two more girls like cats on hot tin roofs, and they're wondering how they ate going to divert attention of Charles, to smuggle the girls off the island, well done, blessings Roy
Typo : he'd expect you (to do) something.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Things seem to be in pace now for the furthering of procedures, with two more girls like cats on hot tin roofs, and they're wondering how they ate going to divert attention of Charles, to smuggle the girls off the island, well done, blessings Roy
Typo : he'd expect you (to do) something.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Sending apologies for my tardiness and lots of hugs and love for you and yours for the holidays. I pray that you and your family feel the blessings of the season. As always, I hold you dear to my heart.
Have a great day and may all God's blessings find you.
Always, Carol
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Bless you
Carol
