Revenge
Viewing comments for Chapter 26 "Revenge - Chap 26"Evil stalks the dynamic crime team
18 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
This has really brought me back into the loop, and what a good one it is, too. I'll do quick reviews, no errors found, but I want to read on!! Well done, my friend, I'm back!! :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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This has really brought me back into the loop, and what a good one it is, too. I'll do quick reviews, no errors found, but I want to read on!! Well done, my friend, I'm back!! :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 12-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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And unfortunately i will do quick thank yous. I am so so far behind and Kaitlyn is driving our family into a whirlwind of a mess.
Love ya, Carol
Comment from robyn corum
Carol,
Ouch. Don't be misplacing a PHONE, sister. Not nowadays! It'll have everything in the world on it. And tooooo much of everything at that!
A sm note:
--> before taking a bite of their (own) delicious burger(s).
And then I'm still moving!
(BTW, I know you stay behind like me, so please don't feel you have to respond to each of these individually. No worries!)
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Carol,
Ouch. Don't be misplacing a PHONE, sister. Not nowadays! It'll have everything in the world on it. And tooooo much of everything at that!
A sm note:
--> before taking a bite of their (own) delicious burger(s).
And then I'm still moving!
(BTW, I know you stay behind like me, so please don't feel you have to respond to each of these individually. No worries!)
Comment Written 30-Nov-2021
Comment from Ulla
Hi Carol, things are starting coming together, and Sam,s grandfather appears to have solved the case with the photos.But how is Sam going to be able to call for help if she can't find her phone? Great dialogue writing. Ullaxx
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2021
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Hi Carol, things are starting coming together, and Sam,s grandfather appears to have solved the case with the photos.But how is Sam going to be able to call for help if she can't find her phone? Great dialogue writing. Ullaxx
Comment Written 28-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2021
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He certainly sent them on the right track and things are coming together for all of them...hopefully it will be in time.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
Sorry it's taken me so long to review your post. But, they liked me so much at the hospital the first trip that, they made me come back for a longer visit. Glad to be out and reading your posts. :-)
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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Sorry it's taken me so long to review your post. But, they liked me so much at the hospital the first trip that, they made me come back for a longer visit. Glad to be out and reading your posts. :-)
Comment Written 26-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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Were you sweeping all those cute nurses right off their feet with your charm? Hope you are doing okay now or maybe you need some more of those sugar pills they hand out to the sweeties. Take care -
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
I liked this chapter. You have written it well and introduced elements of suspense. Samatha is a witness to a murder. How will she report if she can't find her phone? The bad guys never imagined an old man on the beach with a camera taking v pictures of the entire event. What next?
The dialogues take the story forward. Good going!
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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I liked this chapter. You have written it well and introduced elements of suspense. Samatha is a witness to a murder. How will she report if she can't find her phone? The bad guys never imagined an old man on the beach with a camera taking v pictures of the entire event. What next?
The dialogues take the story forward. Good going!
Comment Written 25-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much for the kind review and your time as you continue to review. Hugs, Carol
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
This is a very exciting development in your story. Sam's grandfather cracked the case, with photos from his camera! Drake and his sidekick wanted on some very hefty charges -- and now they've got a bead on Jaz. I didn't find any errors :-)
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2021
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This is a very exciting development in your story. Sam's grandfather cracked the case, with photos from his camera! Drake and his sidekick wanted on some very hefty charges -- and now they've got a bead on Jaz. I didn't find any errors :-)
Comment Written 23-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2021
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Yes, Vito/James, and Charles never imagined an old man on the beach with a camera that took vivid pictures of the entire event. They will get theirs... or at least I hope.
Hugs, Carol
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Love it! I don't know if you had time to read it, but I sent you a pm, in response to your thank-you for the six. I was wondering what you thought. God bless you, my friend.
Love always, Mary Kay xoxo
Comment from Carol Clark2
A well-written chapter, with good dialogue. I'm glad they finally got a look at the photos, and that Sam recognized those involved. I hope they can rescue Tiffany and Marian before anything worse happens to them. Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2021
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A well-written chapter, with good dialogue. I'm glad they finally got a look at the photos, and that Sam recognized those involved. I hope they can rescue Tiffany and Marian before anything worse happens to them. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 23-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2021
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I fear things are going to get much worse before they get better. Samantha needs to find her phone!!
Hugs, Carol
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Yes she does. Panic time when I can't find mine! Lol. Have a good Thanksgiving.
Comment from BethShelby
It looks like that might be something good on the photograph that were taken the night of beach fire. I glad you are still posting chapters as often as you do. When I'm upset at home, I have a hard time writing anything. You write well under pressure.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2021
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It looks like that might be something good on the photograph that were taken the night of beach fire. I glad you are still posting chapters as often as you do. When I'm upset at home, I have a hard time writing anything. You write well under pressure.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2021
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Oh, Beth, I am so sorry to hear that things are not going well for you at home. For some odd reason, God made me an energizer bunny with a slight electrical short for times when things are rough. It's after the "waves of destruction" ease that I become a pile of mush.
Please message me if you need to chat or just vent. That is what friends are for... I will keep you in my prayers... I think they assigned me a few full-time angels just for my list. LOL
Love ya, Carol
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Thank you, Carol. Nothing major going on with me. I just don't care for the cold temperature and the fact I've let my house and property go to pot and I don't have the energy I used to have.
The Holidays make life more hectic than usual. I've got a lot to be thankful for, so I'm ashamed for complaining.
Comment from LJbutterfly
There's so much suspense it's making me anxious. Where is Samantha's phone. I hope that doesn't turn into anything detrimental, and I hope Samantha doesn't go off on her own trying to pursue her personal case. Another great episode. See you in chapter 27.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2021
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There's so much suspense it's making me anxious. Where is Samantha's phone. I hope that doesn't turn into anything detrimental, and I hope Samantha doesn't go off on her own trying to pursue her personal case. Another great episode. See you in chapter 27.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2021
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Lorraine, I hope all is well with you. Thank you for the great review, as always. I am thinking of two totally different outcomes with that phone.... I guess we wait and see. LOL Thanks so much.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Everyone's walking a tightrope.
(( I say dangerous something unexpected is going to happen ))
Your chapter in the book Revenge
Revenge - Chap 26
got me anxious when I read the following that you wrote-
When Samantha patted her jacket, looking for her phone. "I must have dropped it in the car."
Hank stood and waited for Emmy. "I'll pay the bill, and Emmy and I will meet you at your car. I'll drive, but the Mercedes only seats two."
"No problem. I've got to call my partner. She could be in danger."
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2021
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Everyone's walking a tightrope.
(( I say dangerous something unexpected is going to happen ))
Your chapter in the book Revenge
Revenge - Chap 26
got me anxious when I read the following that you wrote-
When Samantha patted her jacket, looking for her phone. "I must have dropped it in the car."
Hank stood and waited for Emmy. "I'll pay the bill, and Emmy and I will meet you at your car. I'll drive, but the Mercedes only seats two."
"No problem. I've got to call my partner. She could be in danger."
Comment Written 22-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2021
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Yeah, you are right, Gert! I am not sure whether the phone is going to be a problem or not. I have thoughts of writing it two different ways. Smiles and hugs, Carol
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You are so welcome
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