Reviews from

Sisters Are Forever

Diane passed May 5th 2021

63 total reviews 
Comment from jacquelyn popp
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The poem is well written. It is presented well, and tells a loving, thoughtful story within the poem itself of you and your sister. The love, bond and friendship with your sister is awesome. The rhyming and the way that the words flowed together were perfect. I really enjoyed the poem that you shared that your sister wrote. This poem reminds me of how close my sister and I used to be, and what I would like to have with her again. She lives in another state, and I miss her so. My condolences and prayers to you for your loss. My mom passed away in February. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 26-Aug-2021
    Hi Jacquelyn, I am so sorry for the loss of your mother sweet girl...it's hard losing the ones we love so much...

    my sister moved to Florida...so I would go down 2 or 3 times a year...I would stay for at least a month...I hated to leave my family...if anything...pick up the phone and call...time goes by so fast...

    Thank You so much for your kind words...and for a wonderful review...and you are so very welcome...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from BermyBye50
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Linda,

This is an excellent poem in tribute to your sister.

Your mastery of any form of poetry inspires and encourages. Each write you post is a lesson to those of us who aspire to write as good as you.

To me you are a star. One of the best poets whose work I've had the privilege to read.

Eugene

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 26-Aug-2021
    WOW!!!!!!! Eugene, truly the most amazing review I have
    ever received my sweet friend...Thank You for all your kind words
    sweet guy...I am truly honored...and Thank You for all your shinning stars...God Bless Eugene...love Linda xxoo
Comment from palmart
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Your poem was written not with pen and ink, but with heart and feelings. Let me say that telling "all true" is totally additional, as someone who read your writing (and is human) can feel that easily, with no confusion. Words expresses lots of details that are key to open hearts at readers` lives. Great Job, clearly expressed by the recognitions you earned!

"The words that reach hearts are those that come out of the heart"

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 26-Aug-2021
    Hi Palmart, Thank You so much for a truly wonderful review...
    and for all your kind words...

    I love...
    "The words that reach hearts are those that come out of the heart"...my feeling exactly...

    Thank you so much for all your shinning stars...love Linda xxoo
reply by palmart on 26-Aug-2021
    Dear Linda, Thanks for your words and what I did was only to reflect the light you turned on in your poem. A very good one! If we reflect the lights we receive, we make this World a bit Brighter. For Sure!

    God Bless you, Linda!!
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2021
    so very true...always welcome Palmart...love xxoo
reply by palmart on 26-Aug-2021
    You too, Linda!! Have a wonderful time, full of inspiring muses!!

    God bless you!
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2021
    God Bless you as well...going to bed...you have sweet dreams...sleep tight...love xxoo
reply by palmart on 27-Aug-2021
    Thanks a lot for your nice wishes! Hope you the best for tomorrow! And same here, going to be bed after a long day (and a nice one: I met you!) Have a lovely week!
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2021
    I am honored...and you have a wonderful weekend...God Bless...xxoo
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2021
    I am honored...and you have a wonderful weekend...God Bless...xxoo
reply by palmart on 27-Aug-2021
    Thanks for your lovely message, Linda!

    Have a great weekend!!
Comment from Gregory Lambert
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This is a beautiful poem. You've expressed the love you shared with your sister and the heartache you felt at her passing. A powerful poem and very well written. Thank you for sharing it!

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 26-Aug-2021
    Hi Gregory, Thank You my sweet friend for a wonderful review...
    and you are so very welcome...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Nathan J Hope
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What a beautiful bond between sisters.
Having a sister is like having a Best friend you can't get rid of.
You know whatever you do , they'll still be there
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Thank you for sharing .God bless

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 26-Aug-2021
    Hi Nathan, LOL...your so right...we pretty much stayed in touch...but there were times that a call would have to do...
    Thank You for a wonderful review...and you sir are so welcome...
    love Linda xxoo
Comment from Susanjohn
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Hello Linda, I am so sorry for your loss. What a blessing you had with your sister!!! Such beautiful memories to carry you through this life...till you meet again. :-) I love that you added Diane's writings! Such a lovely read!

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 26-Aug-2021
    Hi Susanjohn, Thank you my sweet friend for a wonderful review...and allll your shinning stars...
    thank you for your kind words...

    Diane had two poems published...but never showed anyone the other ones...I am honored to show her writings...
    Thank You...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from Jesse James Doty
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This is very touching and heartfelt. Both you and your sister are creative poets. I like her poem about the swing and the cloud's silver lining. Even though it is a rough draft, it shows great potential. Did you both write poetry when you were younger? Your closeness is a wonderful thing and, I know you miss her a lot even though she moved away to Florida. Your game of looking out for her every time you took her to her apartment reminds me of my partner. Audrey always looked out for me too. She made sure I was all right before I would drive home after visiting her. Later, when we lived together, she was the defender of our place and, I always felt safe with her around.
Thank you for filling me in on your lives together in your author's notes. The added touch was very appealing.
Best wishes to you, and bless you for having a sister so close.
Have a great day,
Jesse


 Comment Written 26-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 26-Aug-2021
    Hi Jesse, Than You sweet guy for a wonderful review...
    I think my sister started writing before I did...
    I started after my husband passed...

    I'm so glad you found someone in your life who made you feel save...Audrey sounds like a wonderful person...

    Thank You...and you are so very welcome...love Linda xxoo
reply by Jesse James Doty on 27-Aug-2021
    Good morning, Linda. Grief is a powerful yet normal part of life and can be good for the soul. I admire you and your sister's relationship and believe that you both were fortunate to have each other. Audrey and I were fortunate as well.
    Thanks for offering your love...that is very sweet of you.
    Have a wonderful day,
    Jesse
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2021
    smiling so big...and you have a wonderful weekend...God Bless.love xxoo
reply by Jesse James Doty on 27-Aug-2021
    Enjoy your weekend as well!
    Smiles for miles,
    Jesse
Comment from pookietoo
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Great job with the great poem. Keep up the great work writing your poems. I enjoyed reading this poem. Good luck and best wishes. Keep smiling. :) :)

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 26-Aug-2021
    Hi Pookietoo, Thank You for a great review...smiling big back at you...love Linda xxoo
reply by pookietoo on 26-Aug-2021
    You as re welcome.
Comment from AnnaLinda
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Dear Sweet Linda,

This is a beautiful duet poem. I love yours and your sister had her own special voice.

I also love your personal author notes and I'm so sorry for your loss...Dear God...right by the loss of your mom.

God bless you! Just happened to see this. Wishing you well always.

Love
AnnaLinda

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2021
    Hi AnnaLinda, so good to see you my sweet friend....and so glad you stayed...you are a big part of FanStory...your one of our sisters...

    I'm so glad you read my sisters poem...that's what's important to me...she was so talented...

    Thank You sweet girl for a wonderful review...and all your so shinning stars...it's so good to see you...much love coming your way...Linda xxoo

reply by AnnaLinda on 25-Aug-2021
    ❤❤❤
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2021
    your so sweet...sigh...love xxoo
Comment from Mrs. KT
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Hello Linda,
Another poignant posting from both you and your sister...
Piecing together the previous poem you penned about your sister with this one, I can tell that your relationship was beautiful and true. So very moved by the situations that challenged both of you...
One note: I realize that your sister's poem is a "rough draft," but I am wondering if you thought to change "eveloped" to "enveloped." Just a thought...
Thank you for sharing!
diane

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2021
    Hi Diane, LOL...I'm sure I just misspelled it...she was good at spelling...I was always calling her and asking her how to spell something...Thank you for the help...fixed....I miss her her sooooo much...

    Thank You for a wonderful review my sweet friend...and all
    your shinning stars...and you are so very welcome...love you...Linda xxoo