Comment from Father Flaps

Excellent

Hi Harry,
I like your poem because it whisks me through a cold winter, and into spring.
"April breeze, sky bright blue"
I like the alliteration of "flowers flouncing/grass gleaming", and also in your title, "Spring Stirring",
and the hint of love, "male doves croon a hopeful coo"
I have a couple of minor suggestions, just for a smoother read, see what you think...
"grass gleaming with morning dew
male doves croon a hopeful coo"
(grasses gleam with morning dew
male dove croons a hopeful coo)
I hope this helps.
Good Luck in the voting!
Cheers,
Kimbob

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021

Thanks, appreciate your thoughts and suggestions. Will incorporate.

Comment from zanya

Excellent

A beautiful picture of the best of Spring yet to come - full of color and sweet sounds of 'doves croon'- so much to look forward to as winter begins to take a back seat soon!

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2021

You are not the only one. Thanks for read and feedback.

Comment from RodG

Excellent

You are thinking ahead to Spring just like me, Harry. Who doesn't wish for balmy April days and flouncing flowers, green grass and cooing doves? Rod

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021

Thanks for read and review. Appreciated it.

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

I smell spring reading your poem and I feel refreshing joy and happiness. I think you have a winner here.Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and your writings.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021

Thanks for read and review. Glad you could smell the flowers.