war and peace
a peaceful word may have a chance to win2 total reviews
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent, concise poem for the contest
that is most appropriate for these times.
All you need is love, and the effort to make peace a reality.
Well done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
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This is an excellent, concise poem for the contest
that is most appropriate for these times.
All you need is love, and the effort to make peace a reality.
Well done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 08-Jan-2021
Comment from Jasmine Girl
Good job for writing a four-line rhyming poem. The last line is deep but I got it. The falconer glove protects you during the war.
You should change this to poetry from fiction.
Well done.
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Good job for writing a four-line rhyming poem. The last line is deep but I got it. The falconer glove protects you during the war.
You should change this to poetry from fiction.
Well done.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2021