Reviews from

On Gossamer Wings

A lune about how dreams can take flight.

6 total reviews 
Comment from lyenochka
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

A lovely lune. And I like your use of "gossamer wings" for the sweet time of sleeping and dreaming as your poem is so aptly illustrated! Congratulations on the win!!


 Comment Written 14-Jan-2021

reply by the author on 14-Jan-2021
    Thank you ever so much for your review with its comments. They are really appreciated.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Congrats on your win for this lovely and elegant lune! Glad I caught up to this--pic looks familiar--I used it once on a piece about (not) sleeping. Cheers. LIZ

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2021

reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
    Thank you for your review and comments. Didn't mean to horn in on your choice of artwork. I just thought it would work well with my words.
    fm wright
reply by Elizabeth Emerald on 13-Jan-2021
    Artwork is up for grabs for the benefit of all! I've used many multiple times, some I see others used before/after me.
Comment from dragonpoet
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Yes, children have such great imaginations. It is a great gift when adults keep that imagination and write it down for all to read.
Congratulations on winning the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
dragonpoet

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2021

reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
    Thank you ever so much foryour kind words.
reply by dragonpoet on 13-Jan-2021
    You are most kindly welcome.
    Joan
Comment from Contests

Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

A contest winning entry! A seven star rating from the Contest Committee for posting the winning contest entry.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2021

reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
    I can't thank you enough for this honor. I truly appreciate it.
Comment from Anne Johnston
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

I like it. Gossamer wings - thoughts that come into our minds in the night, and if we don't get up and write them down, they are gone in the morning.

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2020

reply by the author on 27-Dec-2020
    They certainly are with me. Thank you so much for the comments and rating.
reply by Anne Johnston on 27-Dec-2020
    You are welcome
Comment from Sally Law
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Fantastic lune poem and just so sweet with childlike dreams and wonder! Splendid offering for the contest, dear Faye! Sending you my best today as always and my very best for the upcoming contest,
Sally XOs...xo...

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2020

reply by the author on 27-Dec-2020
    Thank you ever so much. I truly appreciate the stars, comments and your support.