Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

Dear Teresa - this one I've watched many times....the waves coming in can be heartless at washing away what I've penned :) I liked this one, touches that place so often lonely. Well penned and good luck my friend.
Thanks for sharing,
Maureen

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2015

Thank you Maureen. I was inspired while on the beach in Maui:)

Comment from sunnilicious

Excellent

That's a romantic and cute poem. Enjoyable to read. Well thought out and clearly rhymed. Good visual imagery created through descriptive and simple words. Good thoughts to ponder. Nice.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2015

Thank you so much:)

Comment from Jennpenn

Excellent

What a provocative and intriguing idea! I love the image of the "sands of time" holding so many people's hopes and dreams within them. And the nature of sand--to shift back and forth with the tides--is such a perfect metaphor for the nature of life and love: always changing. Well-done!

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 Comment Written 07-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2015

Thank you for the lovely review Jenn:)