Lonely Hearts Meet
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Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Barbara,
I am glad this chapter wasn't a cliff hanger! I am always so afraid Bobby will somehow get out of jail and come looking for Anna and Michael. So far they are safe but for how long? I keep waiting for the other shoe to drop! I am happy you had a good Thanksgiving with your family but it is always nice to come home. Well done....blessings, chey
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2011
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Hi Barbara,
I am glad this chapter wasn't a cliff hanger! I am always so afraid Bobby will somehow get out of jail and come looking for Anna and Michael. So far they are safe but for how long? I keep waiting for the other shoe to drop! I am happy you had a good Thanksgiving with your family but it is always nice to come home. Well done....blessings, chey
Comment Written 27-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
I think the realization she is better off in a 'cliff hanger' for Anna. Well written and as always I am so glad you are addressing this issue~Debbie
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I think the realization she is better off in a 'cliff hanger' for Anna. Well written and as always I am so glad you are addressing this issue~Debbie
Comment Written 27-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sweet Anita
In this chapter, Anna seems finally able to settle down and having a feeling of peace at last.. But I am wondering if you are setting us up for some kind of disaster, like another attempted kidnapping. I thought I saw a few such clues dropped. :-) I felt this was a great chapter that worked in well with thoughts and mood of Thanksgiving. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Nita :-)
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2011
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In this chapter, Anna seems finally able to settle down and having a feeling of peace at last.. But I am wondering if you are setting us up for some kind of disaster, like another attempted kidnapping. I thought I saw a few such clues dropped. :-) I felt this was a great chapter that worked in well with thoughts and mood of Thanksgiving. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Nita :-)
Comment Written 27-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2011
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Thank you for the kind review and insight. Anna's life will not run smoothly.
Comment from Gungalo
This chapter is just fine Barbara. It shows the anticlimax well and how one can settle down, even if for a few moments, in a very busy world. I hope it stays this way.
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This chapter is just fine Barbara. It shows the anticlimax well and how one can settle down, even if for a few moments, in a very busy world. I hope it stays this way.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2011
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It won't. Thank you for the kind review.
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Oh boy, I can hardly wait!!
Comment from c_lucas
Anna has a lot of adjusting to do. You have slipped in a little suspene with the loud muffler. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read.
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Anna has a lot of adjusting to do. You have slipped in a little suspene with the loud muffler. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You're welcome, Barbara. Charlie
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, barbara, a great job writing this chapter where anna is recovering from listening to others' experiences and realizing her freedom from bruises and chains.
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this is very well written, barbara, a great job writing this chapter where anna is recovering from listening to others' experiences and realizing her freedom from bruises and chains.
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Comment Written 27-Nov-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.