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Lonely Hearts Meet

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Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.

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Comment from jadapenn
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Hi Barbie, quite and intense day in court for Anna. This young attorney seems to dig everything out whether it pertains to the case or not.
Well written. I enjoyed. luv jada

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2011


reply by the author on 23-Oct-2011
    Thank you for the kind review and support.
Comment from Gungalo
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This is really dragging it out for all to see. Is it possible that he is trying to sway the judge in any fashion he knows? Sigh, poor poor man.

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2011


reply by the author on 23-Oct-2011
    Thank you for the kind review.
reply by Gungalo on 23-Oct-2011
    Smiling at you.
Comment from c_lucas
Exceptional
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This is a shocking ending to the post. You need to check your Author's Notes. Evil Eddie displayed some of his handy work. Your story is very well written. You've earned your sixer.

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2011


reply by the author on 23-Oct-2011
    Thank you for your kindness. I corrected EE. Maybe I missed something.
reply by c_lucas on 23-Oct-2011
    You're welcome, Barbara. Charlie
Comment from robina1978
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This chapter brings a completely unexpected twist at the end. Or is it just hepatitis B in the past?
But the judge and jury might look at this different.
The court case does not seem to go the way we all would like it to go.

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 Comment Written 23-Oct-2011


reply by the author on 23-Oct-2011
    Thank you for the kind review.