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Lonely Hearts Meet

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Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.

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Comment from The Stranger
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I sense more danger just around the corner for Anna, I have a gut feeling that Bobby is not as far away from Anna as they would have her believe

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 Comment Written 10-Jul-2011


reply by the author on 10-Jul-2011
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from c_lucas
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

It looks like Anna is ready to fight back. I like the way Paul talked to her about her intelligence. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read. Very good job.

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2011


reply by the author on 10-Jul-2011
    Anna is going to need a lot of help to raise her self esteem. Thank you for your kind review and support.
reply by c_lucas on 10-Jul-2011
    You're welcome, Barbara. Charlie