Quietude
Heroic Crown Of Sonnets - 15 interlinked sonnets.84 total reviews
Comment from Justa Begina
Hi there Gun, i really enjoyed reading your sonnets, now i am not an expert in this field but as i read it I found the lines flowed very smoothly capturing the moment. It contained for me deep soulful meaning that caught my attention to the very end . I was very impressed with the length of the piece and the time you have taken to put this masterpiece together. Your use of rhyme was excellent, i dont think i would know where to start with such an enormous challenge. You are very talented. It was an absolute pleasure to read ! Thank you for posting it !
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2010
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Hi there Gun, i really enjoyed reading your sonnets, now i am not an expert in this field but as i read it I found the lines flowed very smoothly capturing the moment. It contained for me deep soulful meaning that caught my attention to the very end . I was very impressed with the length of the piece and the time you have taken to put this masterpiece together. Your use of rhyme was excellent, i dont think i would know where to start with such an enormous challenge. You are very talented. It was an absolute pleasure to read ! Thank you for posting it !
Comment Written 24-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2010
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Thank you poet for the smile you just left here with me. Makes the time spent well worth the effort. MUAHHHHHHHHHHH.
Comment from fdgsr
I still ponder this ponderous poem. It certainly fills my soul with delight, and helped me interpret my dreams last night. You have captured such a wondrous rhythm bereft of extraneous surplus stuff. The syllable count is good and well thought out to bring such a feeling of the poet's charm. I seldom give a 6 star, but this one deserves more than five. Thanks.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2010
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I still ponder this ponderous poem. It certainly fills my soul with delight, and helped me interpret my dreams last night. You have captured such a wondrous rhythm bereft of extraneous surplus stuff. The syllable count is good and well thought out to bring such a feeling of the poet's charm. I seldom give a 6 star, but this one deserves more than five. Thanks.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2010
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Sigh sure hope your dream was a good one. Thanks so much poet for your time here as this one is the longest poem I've ever written. LOL. Your patience and time is well appreciated. Have a great day.
Comment from sheilanewton
"Such music sweet in stillness wafts on high"
What a lovely line that is. And do you know, you used all of the senses, sight sound, touch etc to such good effect except 1 - I didn't notice 'smell' at all, or did I get that one wrong? If you didn't it's a pity because the rest are there - if you did, it's my 'faux pas' and sorry.
Fantastic poem. Well done, you
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2010
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"Such music sweet in stillness wafts on high"
What a lovely line that is. And do you know, you used all of the senses, sight sound, touch etc to such good effect except 1 - I didn't notice 'smell' at all, or did I get that one wrong? If you didn't it's a pity because the rest are there - if you did, it's my 'faux pas' and sorry.
Fantastic poem. Well done, you
Comment Written 24-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2010
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Thanks you!!! You know, I'd have to go check. So many lines in this one and so long. I appreciate you reading it and the wonderful review of it. Not an easy task for sure.
Comment from Triple P
I am a sucker for a good sonnet. You have several here. My favorite, I think, is the first one. Sorry, no suggestions. They're good how they are.
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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2010
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I am a sucker for a good sonnet. You have several here. My favorite, I think, is the first one. Sorry, no suggestions. They're good how they are.
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Comment Written 24-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2010
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Thanks Triple P for a wonderful review. Muses have their fun too, eh? Have a beautiful day.