CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from rmdelta
Sue,
Now, this was interesting, my friend. Very well written and quite strong, all brought about by your excellent use of terrific descriptives. Well done, Sue.
Reggie
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2009
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Sue,
Now, this was interesting, my friend. Very well written and quite strong, all brought about by your excellent use of terrific descriptives. Well done, Sue.
Reggie
Comment Written 28-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2009
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Reggie, okay then....now we can get 'back together'. Ha!! So glad you liked this one!! Your lady in need of rescue...bring out the posse...please! :-)) Sue
Comment from Amfunny
This was a really awesome poem. It was well done and a pleasure to read. You have a way of describing things with such beautiful words. The art and color choices were also complementary to this piece. Very good job. Awesome.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2009
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This was a really awesome poem. It was well done and a pleasure to read. You have a way of describing things with such beautiful words. The art and color choices were also complementary to this piece. Very good job. Awesome.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2009
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amfunny, your exceptional review on this work means more than you know. I've been "wordless" for 3 days and decided to be true to my feelings of the moment. To have it appreciated with your highest regard is worth it all. Hand to heart, Sue
Comment from writechick
I can definitely relate to this poem and the descriptions you use. These emotions you portrayed are real and deep, and they are so true. I can especially relate to the first and last lines of this poem. Thank you for sharing your work!!
~~Hannah
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2009
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I can definitely relate to this poem and the descriptions you use. These emotions you portrayed are real and deep, and they are so true. I can especially relate to the first and last lines of this poem. Thank you for sharing your work!!
~~Hannah
Comment Written 28-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2009
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Hannah, thank you so much for saying which lines hit home for you. Means a lot. And thank you for your very generous review. With regards, Sue
Comment from Nanette Mary
Hullo Sixteezkid ...
In this well-written poem, you have clearly expressed feelings and emotions and there is just one small correction to be made ...
* You have - before it turns to steal ... this should be -
before it turns to steel ....
I enjoyed reading this because you bring out the point that, in spite of so much hurt and pain in a person's life, he or she may still have the capacity to feel something whilst believing that all emotion has been stifled.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
With love from .... Nanette Mary.
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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2009
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Hullo Sixteezkid ...
In this well-written poem, you have clearly expressed feelings and emotions and there is just one small correction to be made ...
* You have - before it turns to steal ... this should be -
before it turns to steel ....
I enjoyed reading this because you bring out the point that, in spite of so much hurt and pain in a person's life, he or she may still have the capacity to feel something whilst believing that all emotion has been stifled.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
With love from .... Nanette Mary.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2009
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I only sold steel for a living for years and here I misspell it. HA! Thanks for that. So glad you read it as intended. Yes, "stifled" is the word. Thank you so much for your close read and great review. With regards, Sue
Comment from Domino
WOW, Sue, this is incredible. Such emotion, feeling, honesty and poetic expression. I'm in awe of the meter, rhyme and content, EVERY word is perfect. I can't remember a better and more heart-felt poem of yearning for love, and all the extreme feelings it brings. KUDOS!
I'll be back tomorrow to up-grade to a sixer, if I'm allowed to. WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Love, Ray xx
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2009
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WOW, Sue, this is incredible. Such emotion, feeling, honesty and poetic expression. I'm in awe of the meter, rhyme and content, EVERY word is perfect. I can't remember a better and more heart-felt poem of yearning for love, and all the extreme feelings it brings. KUDOS!
I'll be back tomorrow to up-grade to a sixer, if I'm allowed to. WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Love, Ray xx
Comment Written 28-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2009
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Ray, your review is of the highest honor. And you know that. Coming from you, it means the world. Every word of your review has gone straight to my heart and makes it all worthwhile. I mean that from my depths. Luv ya, Ray xx
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I'm sober (ish), Sue and meant every word. Your poem is truly moving and exceptional. Love ya, Ray xx
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"ish"?? Say it ain't so. ;-)) Sue
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I've had a coupla night-caps, Sue. Just starting to kick in. Trouble is when I've had a drink I get all tactile and sexy. Then I have to use my imagination. Here's to you (raising my glass). Cheers, ray xx
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If you get all tactile and sexy, you'd better have someone around! LOL!!!
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No one here except 'Teddy'. Boo-hoo. xx
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Morning, Sue. I just up-rated to a wonderful 'sixer'. xx
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I saw that you came back and did give me the lovely sixer, Ray. Sorry I haven't been too "communicative". And not reading much. A lot going on right now. (Trying to get my head screwed on right). I can make about 5 decisions about Jessica's life right now and each one is more than painful. So, just wanted you to know I'm very grateful, but just haven't been around much. I signed up for your sonnet contest, but missed it due to all this shit. So, tonight, I just posted a little ditty for another contest I'd already signed onto. Again, thanks for your great review on this one. xx Sue
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Thanks for getting back, Sue. Hey, you get on and do what ta gota do.
FS has no comparison to the 'real' world. I'm sure you'll make the right decision for Jessica and yourself, and you're in my thoughts.
Love, Ray xx