Comment from
Tina Crute
What an imaginative story! I enjoyed this off the beaten path poem.I just looked back to see the rhymes that I hadn't noticed. I found myself chuckling a bit at the devil's description of Patrick's attitude and activities.
Well done!
Tina
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Comment Written 19-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2021
Thanks, Tina. Patrick is quite a character. I'm trying for a fourth poem. We'll have to see how it goes.
reply by Tina Crute on 19-Nov-2021
Ooh. I can't wait! You are very welcome!