Comment from Cookie333

Excellent

Bubbles! Young children do love to watch them fly, and those from gum are even more of a mystery-particularly when they originate from a green, grinning creature, haha
what a great face...thanks so much for sharing his adventure with all of us Brooke,
k

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013

Cookie, thank you so very much :-) Brooke

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

This is a delightful, bouncy flow and playful mood. I love the description of the green creature with purple feet. How interesting that the narrator was so frightened of the creature until he saw it chewing gum! The narrator concludes that since he isn't chewing off limbs he must be okay. Then the discovery that it was the popping of the bubble gum that brightened the creature. He had scared himself. It's great that the narrator ends up reassuring the green creature. Such delightful fun. judi

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013

Judi, thank you so very much :-) Brooke

reply by judiverse on 29-Aug-2013

You're so welcome. It was delightful. judi

Comment from 3boysrule

Excellent

Brooke, Great poem! It reminds me of my youngest son. We went to a minor league ball game. The mascot scared him. Even now that he's 5, he will mention the scary giant woodchuck!
Thanks for sharing your wonderful poems!
Dee

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013

Dee, thank you so much :-) I love your story - my daughter was afraid of characters like that too :-) Brooke

Comment from Bobby Jo

Excellent

This really flowed well, and was very descriptive. I could see this in a child's book of poems. Thanks for sharing such a fun poem.

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013

Bobby, thank you so very much :-) Brooke

Comment from Jendowoz

Excellent

This is such a cute poem, Brooke. It has a gorgeous rhythm and reads so well aloud. I love reading your poems.I would have to say your poems are the best I've read and so inspiring. You have a real talent.

regards, Jen

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013

Jen, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Darkhorse555

Excellent

i must be colour blind is that the incredible hulk ha ha beautiful picture one more for the album i enjoyed reading bubbles just blowing

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013

Darkhorse, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Louise Michelle

Excellent

Hi Brooke,

This is absolutely charming. How could a child possibly be frightened of a gum chewing monster. I wish I had this poem to read to my younger son when he was little and scared of one of his clown dolls. I had to shove it into the back of his closet.

Hugs,
Lou

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013

Lou, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Mastery

Excellent

Hi, Brooke. This is very clever and cute. I do hope you read these to Sawyer...or at least make sure he hears them when he's a bit older. Well, done by a loving grandmother. :) Bob

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013

Bob, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Roxanna Andrews

Excellent

You must do a children's book. These are just too cute and that picture of you grandson is so perfect for the poem. What a little cutie. Well done as always, Rox

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013

Rox, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Keri353

Exceptional

Oh My Goodness... I love the eyes! This is a great kids poem that's squelches the bad guy. Rather squelches what the kids perceive as the bad guy. The pictures says it all. Thanks for sharing Sawyer with us. Blessings, Keri

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013

Keri, thank you so much :-) I appreciate your thoughtful comments and generous rating. Brooke

reply by Keri353 on 29-Aug-2013

You are very welcome :)