Quietude
Heroic Crown Of Sonnets - 15 interlinked sonnets.84 total reviews
Comment from rosah
this was all just totally beautiful, i hated for it to end, it's message is so amazingly lovely, and lovingly true, contentment does come to those who knew it would, this whole poem is SO my entire philosophy, if i had six stars you'd get them, although this deserves so much more! thank you for sharing, blessings.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2010
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this was all just totally beautiful, i hated for it to end, it's message is so amazingly lovely, and lovingly true, contentment does come to those who knew it would, this whole poem is SO my entire philosophy, if i had six stars you'd get them, although this deserves so much more! thank you for sharing, blessings.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2010
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Thank you so much rosah!!! It is also my philosophy and where I go for my inspiration and satisfaction .. to my muse and soulmate. What a fantastic review and smile you have left here for me!!!
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very long and hard to keep focused on. i felt like i was reading a book. i admire the dedication it took to write this and you did an excellent job. it is very articulate and thought out.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2010
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this is very long and hard to keep focused on. i felt like i was reading a book. i admire the dedication it took to write this and you did an excellent job. it is very articulate and thought out.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2010
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LOL you should try writing it!!! Talk about hard to stay focused!! It's an amazing feat just to get through the entire thing but well worth it when it is finished. Thanks so much for your great review.
Comment from annettebda
This is a masterpiece, piece of a master perhaps, quite beautiful in it's imagery and metaphor. I read for those who cannot read for themselves and this ranks with Maya Angelou for ease and power of voice. It has music in it. The stars don't really mean that much but still I wish I had a sixth.
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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2010
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This is a masterpiece, piece of a master perhaps, quite beautiful in it's imagery and metaphor. I read for those who cannot read for themselves and this ranks with Maya Angelou for ease and power of voice. It has music in it. The stars don't really mean that much but still I wish I had a sixth.
:)<
Comment Written 24-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2010
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Who cares about stars when the smile I'm now wearing from you is more brilliant than all of them. You have honored me with this review and I am ever so thankful. This piece was something I just had to write and so much of me is in it that to know it is to know me. MUAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH and thank you again.
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Comment from Rdfrdmom2
Gungalo:
I applaud your fifteen interconnecting
sonnets -- when I happen to write one,
it is normally an accident
I take it the first line of the next
verse has to be the same as the last
line of the previous verse is one of
the rules
thanks for sharing
love,
jan
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2010
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Gungalo:
I applaud your fifteen interconnecting
sonnets -- when I happen to write one,
it is normally an accident
I take it the first line of the next
verse has to be the same as the last
line of the previous verse is one of
the rules
thanks for sharing
love,
jan
Comment Written 24-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2010
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Thank Jan!!! Yes that is ONE of the rules. LOL there are so many I swore I'd never write one. But I did and I am so glad for the experience. After five straight hours of writing ... I'm not sure if and when I'd do it again. LOL. Thank you so very much for a great review of it. I'm smiling!!!!
Comment from katz meow
Gungalo, this is such an awesome work. The fifteen interlinked Sonnets are beautiful. Bless you for putting the effort it took to write this wonderful piece. I truly enjoyed the read...Katz
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2010
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Gungalo, this is such an awesome work. The fifteen interlinked Sonnets are beautiful. Bless you for putting the effort it took to write this wonderful piece. I truly enjoyed the read...Katz
Comment Written 24-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2010
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Thanks so much sweet poet. It WAS a lot of work, thought I was gonna go blind. LOL. YOur words make it all worth it girl. MUAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.
Comment from chita
You have a good flow with your poem and your arthor notes are superb-you write with emotion and give good description all through your poem-I love how you write about quiet and the portals that you have to go through and I feel that anyone could identify with some part of this wonderful poem--if I could give you more stars I would--well done.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2010
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You have a good flow with your poem and your arthor notes are superb-you write with emotion and give good description all through your poem-I love how you write about quiet and the portals that you have to go through and I feel that anyone could identify with some part of this wonderful poem--if I could give you more stars I would--well done.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2010
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Sigh, you take my breath away with your review!! Thank you so much and I appreciate you reading such a long write very much. MUAHH.
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You did a wonderful job and I couldn't stop reading the poem until the end--great writing!!!!
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Sigh, that's such a wonderful thing to say. Thanks again.
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You're welcome:))
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You did a wonderful job:))
Comment from Lastamen
This is a wondeful work of art. Deserving of admiration and delight. A very inspiring and uplifting chain of soul searching and evaluation. Simply outstanding.
Till the last amen
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2010
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This is a wondeful work of art. Deserving of admiration and delight. A very inspiring and uplifting chain of soul searching and evaluation. Simply outstanding.
Till the last amen
Comment Written 24-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2010
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Sigh, what a wonderfully inspiring review, you!!! Thank you so very much and yes ... till the last amen.
Comment from Sharon Lee
I like the refrains... that last stanza was done well, not an easy feat. Did you start with the end stanza and work them into the whole or did you end with the end stanza? Either way, each line in it reads so beautifully. Well done
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2010
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I like the refrains... that last stanza was done well, not an easy feat. Did you start with the end stanza and work them into the whole or did you end with the end stanza? Either way, each line in it reads so beautifully. Well done
Comment Written 24-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2010
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Thank you Sharon. I actually did start with the last sonnet and went from there. Used a formula in each one to have it say something I truly felt. What beautiful words from you. MUAHHHHH.
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My pleasure to read something so well put together
Comment from chells36
When fingers touch the dye of (tehelet) What does the highlighted word mean please
This is a lovely poem but there are some spags in it
The flow is good
this is a lovely piece of poetry
Thanks xx
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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2010
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When fingers touch the dye of (tehelet) What does the highlighted word mean please
This is a lovely poem but there are some spags in it
The flow is good
this is a lovely piece of poetry
Thanks xx
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2010
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Thanks you. Tehelet is a blue dye. A very old word really, you don't hear it much today but a friend of mine taught it to me. I appreciate your review and the smile you left here with me.
Comment from amada
I'm enthralled by this magnificent work. Many images come to my mind but the main one is "as words I write in rhyme for lover's sake. "
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2010
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I'm enthralled by this magnificent work. Many images come to my mind but the main one is "as words I write in rhyme for lover's sake. "
Comment Written 24-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2010
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Thanks Amanda. This entire set of sonnets was written for someone very special to me. Sigh. What a wonderful review.