CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from frelanz
Excellent poem. Great artwork. Love the way the words flow. Enjoyable to read. It's fine how it is and nothing needs to be changed on this. Perfect!!! Well done :-) Dawn
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2009
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Excellent poem. Great artwork. Love the way the words flow. Enjoyable to read. It's fine how it is and nothing needs to be changed on this. Perfect!!! Well done :-) Dawn
Comment Written 07-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2009
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Dawn, thank you for reviewing. So glad your enjoyed it. Thank you for your very kind comments and review. With regards, Sue :-)
Comment from mmichelle97219
Usually I really hate lines that begin with connective conjunctions as usually they weaken a piece of poetry, but in your poem they improve the overall piece nicely. Really good posting.
Michelle
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Usually I really hate lines that begin with connective conjunctions as usually they weaken a piece of poetry, but in your poem they improve the overall piece nicely. Really good posting.
Michelle
Comment Written 07-Jul-2009
Comment from words
So glas to see you posting..haven't seen you in a while...where have you been?
Very well done verse on "fighting on".
Loved the opening stanzas and thre repeat of" for I have my own battle cry":
There is an end to life for me
But my strength and will cannot die
The dark may wax
The light may wane
But I have my own battle cry
No cease in hope--no lying down
As victory in bleakness is nigh
When in the depths
I'll always rise
For I have my own battle cry
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2009
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So glas to see you posting..haven't seen you in a while...where have you been?
Very well done verse on "fighting on".
Loved the opening stanzas and thre repeat of" for I have my own battle cry":
There is an end to life for me
But my strength and will cannot die
The dark may wax
The light may wane
But I have my own battle cry
No cease in hope--no lying down
As victory in bleakness is nigh
When in the depths
I'll always rise
For I have my own battle cry
Comment Written 07-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2009
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Wrote a lot in the winter, but just didn't have it in me in the summer, but just felt like writing tonight. Thanks so much for your lovely comments and great review. So glad you enjoyed it. With warmest regards, Sue
Comment from rama devi
Marvelous to see you posting again dear Sue - You've been missed. this is a potent battle cry - expressive and determined. The artwork lends aesthetic to your morale-boosting write.
Tight and polished, this work is potent and inspiring. I find no nits.
Favorite stanza is the first
There is an end to life for me
But my strength and will cannot die
The dark may wax
The light may wane
But I have my own battle cry
Warmly, rama devi
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2009
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Marvelous to see you posting again dear Sue - You've been missed. this is a potent battle cry - expressive and determined. The artwork lends aesthetic to your morale-boosting write.
Tight and polished, this work is potent and inspiring. I find no nits.
Favorite stanza is the first
There is an end to life for me
But my strength and will cannot die
The dark may wax
The light may wane
But I have my own battle cry
Warmly, rama devi
Comment Written 07-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2009
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rama devi, it's good to be missed (Ha!). Haven't written anything since our dark winter and spring. But just had a few words come to me. Thanks much for your lovely comments and great review. With warmest regards, Sue
Comment from Shirley B
This is a great poem about not giving up. I really enjoyed the poem. You did a great job. Thanks for sharing your poem with me. Shirley
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2009
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This is a great poem about not giving up. I really enjoyed the poem. You did a great job. Thanks for sharing your poem with me. Shirley
Comment Written 07-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2009
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Hi Shirley, I haven't posted here since April and have missed it a lot. Thank you for your lovely comments and for your great review. With regards, Sue
Comment from amada
Dear friend I have missed your postings, I almost wrote you a pm but I didn't want to intrude. No I can read you have gone thru your own battle cry but still with love of life. My best to you!
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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2009
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Dear friend I have missed your postings, I almost wrote you a pm but I didn't want to intrude. No I can read you have gone thru your own battle cry but still with love of life. My best to you!
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Comment Written 07-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2009
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Amada, so glad to hear from you. I suppose the winter gave way to summer and I just didn't write. Missed it a lot. Thanks so much for your great review! Sue :-))